i bit gesus? he wasnt the first one to use teeth. if you were to call me out on a bite i would have called me on a bastardo bite for the teeth, not gesus. [/b][/quote] hey, atliest you can admit it....thats the 1st step, now the next step is being more original and using your own teqnices to get attention
shifted - in my opinion that aint nothing like gesus teeth he uses for his E . . . gesus' teeth on his E are like PHERZ's homie, check the script surprisingly people from the burg be showin up here with some skill . . when i was there yunz scene was fugly . . (i had a lifetime ban form 3 rivers till they blew it up :lol: ) AIM - if you rlookin to battle and get almighty you gotta go thru me first homie . . .them just the rules of engagement . . . unless your true toy . . .
enug: ses "heep" yeah it was to late to fix it when i outlined it. o well, as for your bumb, your 3d is messed up in places, the f could be confused as an r, not feelin the "heart arrow thing" on your e. no fill? but as a whole i like it. the throw u need to work on your f's i guess. still sweet. trying to hard: that just about sums it up in your name man. your force field is to faint, and the thickness of your letters is not consistent. the hightlights seem strange and also out of place in places. but stay simple your on the right track im thinkin. View attachment 240650 View attachment 240651 ^^^ mine after trying to get a decent fill.
hey, atliest you can admit it....thats the 1st step, now the next step is being more original and using your own teqnices to get attention [/b][/quote] the teeth make it look worse. w.e many ppl use teeth. i dont care. w.e
shifted that looks nothing like gesus's style and teeth are a common thing in graff, check out alot of euro writers. fo sale i dont like how long your 3d is. i hate to say it but everyone in this forum sucks now and its just a bunch of toys telling other toys that their ugly stuff looks nice. im not trying to say that im better than everyone but still, this stuff isnt "nice" most of the time. thats not crits thats just an inexperienced novice opinion, you guys really dont know better. fube dont connect the h and the e and dont have a break in the p if you know what i mean i dont think im posting in here anymore.
haha shit now i dont even feel like posting this after reading that /\ /\ /\ anyway fucking with lame extensions but my o sucks balls so whatever is it even worth trying to work with?
wasnt referring to you poed i always thought your straights had alot of potential. i dont like how the holes are sharp, maybe try small holes in the o and d.
This is what I have to contribute. What started off as life studies quickly turned into a disaster. Simple progression is a bitch. [Broken External Image]:http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/126/picture007hv1.jpg
wrote eros shifted and i were battling on this cause i started some beef. we didnt get polled cause were both too toy i guess. let me know what you think.
Dude, not trying to beef or anything but it's not like your crits are a whole lot better than anyone elses or anything. Anyways, aSHID, I'd lose the arrows and addon things, not cause 'arrows are toy' or whatever don't fit or flow, especially since thy're in a different colors. You need to work on your 3D too. Like check out the extension on the far left that connects to the 'R'. The angle of the 3D line on the far left points on less of angle than the 3D line on the right whereas it should be the other way around. Also try and add some more curves into your letters. Small Time Crook, That 'S' is a bit excessive. The rest of the letters are ok but need some fixing up, keep working on simples. Poed, it's not too bad but I would start playing with the letters themselves a bit more before adding extensions to them. Hep, I like the pencil only one. If the 'H' didn't have the little extension to the right of it it would look heaps better IMO. THe loop part of the 'P' could be a little thicker. And something about the 'E' bugs me a bit but overall the concept is good. EDIT: [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch25.jpg At least I did a good job of fucking up the 'C'. Anyways...
that eros is dope as like all of it exept for those blue things style good got nothing wrong ith that piece. xams up top and aken below crits would be dope [Broken External Image]:http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/921/imgp0001ry0.jpg
weldo that first piece is fucking amazing. the only thing i would suggest is to come up with some better colour schemes for the both of them :\ [Broken External Image]:http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5752/picture40qz4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/6501/picture38hv8.jpg ^dropshadow's a little off and it's messy but whatever, it's that official shit.