Could i kindly have some suggestions on how to imrpove on this sketch...if its too toy and shit and it ruins the thread say and ill edit it out ..

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Thanks...

Mith...

 

where you reffering to me if you were i was being sarcastic you stupid theif.

 

not u

 

what ever. you still shouldent say that. he has alot more structure in his letters. he can do simples. wiht out arrows comming out of there buts. really wy do you care if hes so toy anyway?

 

i was jus amazed

 

stop the beef. theif. . . those really arent that great, ur using ur coloring + extentions etc. to hide the lack of letter structure. u should go simpler.

ive only been really writing for one year as well. the other two i was just interested, more and more strongly, not really sketching, just learning everything i could.

maybe i could get some actual advice now?

thanks
peace.





fuckkkk. my bad for starting a new page with my bullshit.

 

well maybe you should start something simples./

 

if u actually look u'll see my letters aint bad u dumb fuks

 

pfft shut up buddy. i cant see anythign at all.

 

than ur dumb ass is blind

 

keep it to the pms u faggot.

 

just make the e go to the right it seems disconnected....
and make the extension on the right of the a not go so far down
and the r in the second picture seems sorta plain
i like them though

thief some of those letters are horribly bad

 

bump for sawzr, this is real clean. i guess he bit ar4's arrows too right fellas?

its a common style. i did a simple lettered sketch with simple extensions. but thanks for even looking at it.

that thief thing is toy.

 

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met this guy on the street who was selling his paintings, i bought these so i thought id sharethem with ya'll

 

Don't listen to people bro. You're in it for yourself. Not for everyone else.

I remember when you just joined. You were so bad.
Your on the right track now. Stay with it.
People seem to forget now and days that you have to
start off somewhere...Sketch more. Sketch with passion.

You'll be fine.

 

Your C and As arent too bad just dont add any of the extensions for now, Work on your Es and clean up your Rs. Your stuff will look a better if you just used similar angles in all of your letters. Like everything that goes like / should be at about the same angle and anything like \ would be at like the same angle as / but reversed.

Keep working. Everybody has the potential to make great work, but most give up before they do.

 

that style is old schoool, if bombing science was made in liek 1980 90, people would love that shit. its just not up to date. that style is oldschool.

 

Lets see some of your brillant up-to-date work.

 

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