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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. sevewon

    sevewon Senior Member

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  2. Jrow17

    Jrow17 Elite Member

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    i agree with tryintohard,you need some nice colors in those sketches bouncingsoul

    sevewon- i kinda like your style man..definitley different from stuff people are used to seeing and thats good.. im diggin the shading on the 3d on the second one.. im not really feelin the 3rd one though
     
  3. Chop Logic

    Chop Logic Senior Member

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    Last night I had to wait in starbucks for 2 hours for my girlfreind while she was at a party, did these while I was there, the last two were just doodles im kind of messing around with a new name, did them while I was tlaking to freinds and shit:

    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v479_FluxOfPinja_three.jpg

    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v479_FluxOfPinja_aymo.jpg

    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v479_FluxOfPinja_aymo2.jpg

    crits welcome, thanks.
     
  4. Apoc

    Apoc Elite Member

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    lol, it says AONER, i know its hard to read cuz everything is connected, but I like it that way.

    chop that shit is decent keep it coming
     
  5. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    eeeeeasy , theres no one to critisize right now . we all know the last post with the k's blows so whats th epoint in saying anything lol. [/b][/quote]
    the one with the K's doesn't "blow" the aren't the best K's but at least he's starting simple, somethin everyone has to do.

    chop- i like i, only thing I don't like is the "C" in the first sketch but other than that its pretty good.
     
  6. freakshow

    freakshow Senior Member

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    chop those are lookin really good. how long have you been writing?
     
  7. Chop Logic

    Chop Logic Senior Member

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    Somewhere around a year, probobly less.

    Thanks guys I'll sketch/post more.
     
  8. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    jrow-i really dont like that too much, if you just evened out your lines itd look really good, and think of a better way for the l and s to meet it looks weird right now.

    sevewon-i cant find your letters,m its not that their hard to find its that their not there. do simples, or at least take some of that stuff away.

    chop-the first two i dont like that much but the two aymo's are pretty nice, just need cleaned up here and there.

    new sketch, actually took time on it, kinda. the little dots were expirementing, i like them a little bit.
    ai114.photobucket.com_albums_n276_joshumms_MVC_032S.jpg
    crits please?
     
  9. Albert Fish

    Albert Fish Elite Member

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    zo - dont connect your letters dont have the teardrop over lap the o
    chop - maybe thin your letters out a little
    bounce - color it doof
    sevewon - aiming too high, if you can't read it dont post it
    slie - love it make the s a little smaller it's over powering the other letters. dont cover the l too much
    uhhh - feelin the e alot, make the m a LITTLE more readable, make the o a little bigger and make the l a little taller. like that alot better than usual stuff though. sorry i left you out
     
  10. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    damn this place is ALIVE

    ive been wroking everday this week, so i ahvent been sketching and im stressin out, haha oh well, heres some handstyles

    uhhh that E is fire, make the M nicer though, not liking the jaggedness of it in the middle, the L's nice, i dont like the arrows in the O

    chop keep up the simples boss and saevwon try and do what chops doin

    [Broken External Image]:http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5899/handymanxe2.jpg
     
  11. TryingTooHard

    TryingTooHard Senior Member

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    Dont mind the outline yet... I dunno what Im doing with anything yet. Im thinking of a shadow for it
    CRITS / FLAMING / HATING WELCOME

    ai38.photobucket.com_albums_e144_mudvayne50_Graffiti_Phly.jpg
     
  12. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    tricks-nice handies, I hate it when I can't sketch which has been this whole week also lol, got a 40 page paper due sux ass.

    Phly-nice and simple, fix up the "Y" a little bit and add a drop shadow it'll look good.
     
  13. jelis

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  14. aim33_28

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    jelis - its alrite - bit hard to make out what it says tho if it says jelis maybe u shuld take out the second bump on the side of the j - kinda makes it look like a weird d - i really like the fill tho - but that mite just be me. overall i would try an redefine ur letters cos really half of em dont look like wot there sposed to be...
    oh and trying to hard.. man i really like it
    peace
     
  15. aim33_28

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  16. jelis

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    the 's' looks lonely... :( ^^^^^^^^^^^^
     
  17. alive

    alive Banned

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    yo. remember me?
    haha


    umm. youve taken a turn to a more abstract style. if thats what u really want, fine, but i think that u have to learn the rules to break them, first learn traditional graffiti.

    drop all your colored markers, pick up a pencil and one black marker. focus on the structure of your letters. go simple. dont bubble unless ur working on a throw. straight lines. dont fill.


    aim, i agree with jelis, she means the S is too far from the rest of the letters. now go get rid of those dots. start making the letters all the same height. unless your working on a throw, dont bubble your letters unless ur working on a throw. straight lines. dont bother with 3d yet.



    peace.
     
  18. Kore123

    Kore123 Senior Member

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    alright sorry guys here goes some crits for everybody..........

    bouncingsoul.....i like ur style those are good try some color

    aim33_28......its alright the s looks a kinda lonely fix the s keep practicing

    jelis.......its pretty good kinda hard to read on the e get rid of that line that goes down on top and on the l take off that seconed bubble on the right and awsome fill

    tryingtoohard.......nice looks good i would say just add some 3-d or shadow and color

    uhhh.........i agree wit albert Fish fix up the m a little make the l and o a little bigger nice fill

    and thanks everybody for my cits
     
  19. TryingTooHard

    TryingTooHard Senior Member

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    OMG... horrid. I tried something with tape and paint.. then colored I think it looks like shit.... Flame away =)

    Phly = Fly

    ai38.photobucket.com_albums_e144_mudvayne50_Graffiti_Phly001_2.jpg
     
  20. enuf.

    enuf. Senior Member

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    Your hand looks like it says Meko. but it's alright.
    But god damn would you stick with one word!?!