okay man...so the same kinda peice....make all the letters the same size...but its only really the H thats biggers...and slowly and only abit twist my letters...but what do you mean by " twist " ???? ... Thanks.. Kickflip...was that directed at me.. ? ..
emokid - your stuff is dope for this toys section Sorry this isn't clear. Bad camera [Broken External Image]:http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/6506/0003670ir7.jpg
No offence mayn...thanks for the crit... but how the hell is the M complicated :blink: ... ALIVE ARE YOU THERE.. !! ...whut u mean by " twist " .. ? Link...frm wut i can see...well i cnrt see much...i can see a S..but there is far far too many uneccary addons etc. go simpler mayn...NO BEEF...hah .. !!
one of the best things ive seen im many many many pages [/b][/quote] its because your a fucking idiot you couldnt recognise style if it cut off your penis linkzone, what the fuck is that? its fuckin wack and ras, alive was right keep it simple emo kid, keep it up and alive, your crits suck have you people been brainwaashed into replying the same way to every single person? its rediculous, think about it
Ok here is more in depth. You can see the letter and outlines now. [Broken External Image]:http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/5193/0003671wp6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8123/0003671222222ep5.jpg
Yo Bo... ! .. you said Alive was right by saying keep it simple...yet you say his crits suck..lol.. :blink: Links...you aint done you self any justice mayn..now it shows that you do have SOME lettter knowledge but not as much for you to start adding on stuff...so...just go simpleee...keep it steadyyyy...and then go onto that shit..after you got simples down !
his crits suck because of this acting all high and mighty, when he still hasnt done a good simple alive also needs to stop doing the same letters over and over again its called stagnation, its the bane of a graffiti writer linkzone its fucking wack, outlining it and coloring it in paint isnt gonna make it any better oh and if i offended anyone, im not really sorry. but pm me and we can argue as long as you want
Hmm... Links go a bit simpler... if you want to add extensions, I'd first do the basic lettering structure (which you obviously did), but then put a box around your peice and make sure all the sextensions stay within that. Also, go for symmetry and balance.
Caer - I like the C, A, and the R. The E needs work and I'd take that bubble off the end of the R Akone - I really like this. It's a nice stylistic simple. I'd take the little doo-dads off the top of the o and e though. Mith - Very nice, but like someone said, make your M more like your H and that would be fuckin solid. Linkzone - Is that supposed to say Scaz? If so your A really needs work. But the rest is pretty good Sezer - I like that a lot but you shouldn't have outlined the pink splats in black. You could've tried that brown rusty color that's in the fill. Just a Simple and a Throw. Crits?
[Broken External Image]:http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/Picture005.jpg Everyone always goes on about simples simples simples. To be honest i never started with simples, I started with pieces and improved them from that... so i decided to do some just to see how they would turn out. I like the one on the left here.. digi cam is at my mates house so shitty webcam pics for now
Soze...man ... i dont like people that admit they bite..so i aint gunna crit you...but i will say...go simpler...and i like the tag Yeah Trash...im in the same boat as you..i feel from doing complex shit...when i went back to simples...i actually had the knowledge and structure on letters... shit looks nice anyways..definatly feeling the T on the left one.. and Bo...you attitude make me luagh like fuck.. ! hahaha aaa :lol: :lol: BFC....yo ... i like the way you give evryone crits.. !...so ima give you sum..okay...that last simple block shit you did..was perfect..okay...now that I think isnt...so whut i wud say is...go get that peice ... heres my very own method of crits : get that peice...pretend itsa bitch....strip of its bra so its her huge titties showing ( take of the 3d ) ... and panties ( take out the fill ) ... untill you just have the body ( the letters themselves ) ... then fuck that bitch...then post it up...im waiting !! :lol: :lol:
trash- I like that simple on the left nyda - you got the right idea, now try adding a drop shadow on the throw and some 3d on the block letters soze- I don't like the fill or the colors and the letters look a little too jagged, they don't flow too well new throw here, any thoughts? View attachment 241526 I fucked up the K it should be thicker
Karma I like that throw a lot. Only thing I can think of to improve it is to make the K and R more like the M in the leg area. Thanks for the crit.
I think the only problem is that the gaps in between letters seem to be too big. Do you know what I'm talkin about? I cant articulate it very well. Overall I think it has alot of potential. -Stinky-
yeah karma, i like that throw a lot too, like BFC said, make the K's and the R's legs like on the M. i dig those A's too. some chunky lettering and a tag [Broken External Image]:http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/7448/photo0001fk2.th.jpg
Sample i cant really crit it cos its simple block lettering like even a non writer would draw. Get rid of the charcter betweeb the letters and add 3d