^^^ the first peice is real sloppy, but the second is fairly clean. your handstyle neeed some serious work... but id say that you stick to the blackbook for a while...
Well since you're a rollerblader I will give you Critz. You didn't drip which is good but your shit lacks any structure whatsoever. Clean them up sketch, make the Letters a lil fatter and such. Also lose the squigle shit. At least your trying to practice before getting up. [/b][/quote] dont ever ttell us how fast you did something, how shitty your paint was, how cold ur hands were, how drunk you were, how high you were, how heat the place was, how tired you were. we dont give a shit. otherwise, your can control is fine, but RUN to the bbook thread cuz ur letters are wack. you dont think that every single writer, does all his shit quickly? u think JA pulls up a chair and a nice cold beer for every throw? we alll have all the same problems. deal with it. trash it is sooo ill. amazing hand control. icer, it looks good, nice can control, but come with me to the bbook thread.
Trash .. looks like Trush Icer...blackbook maaayynneee Ermatic..i dont like that...its plain and dull..but...ifits you throw style..kepp workibg onit..
first of all drop the attempt at 3-d.second don't over lap your letters third make your letters the same size fourth make the letters look similar but besides the trowie ur handstyle is allright keep working on it yo [/b][/quote] sry for double post, needed 2 quotes and its a bitch to do it manually. i doubt that that could be a 3d attempt. its so bad it has to be good. u know? lol. i think hes trying for an abstract style, and i think it looks ill. HOWEVER. you have to know the rules to break them. unless he can also churn out "normal" throws, i dont think he should move on to abstract. keep going, peace.
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that pink "YE" definitly has potential the drip looks messed up though. inless it was because u didnt have enough paint never do a throw of just ur abriviated (fuck spelling) name for atleast a year of solid bombing other wise no one will reconize it. the gold one is nice im not really feeling the "t" and i like how u did the "e" better in the first one keep fucking around with it and tweak it try to make your letters match with each other for example the "a" has a little wave thing on the top but none of the other letters have that so id suggest eather making all the letters have the wavy thing or take it off but it is good my 2 cents take it or leave it
ur 3d on the gold is beyond messed up. wtf happened. keep working on the pink, do ur whole name, it looks nice. when you blow up, take over the entire space. have balls. throw ur name up 100 times. not 1 2 letter throw. control all the space. thats what its about.
haha alive i was lookin for the earliest painted thing you posted.....wow you have come ALONG WAY yeast dont do the w/e the hell you did on the gold one....im likin the letters though and on the ye throw try making the top of the e not rounded...like make it like the bottom pat of the e and itll look very nice
haha o shit. u found that? did u see my old shit on paper too? o man. i thought that had thankfully been fully put to rest. some ppl remember me even from back then though, like proper, so its a cool feeling to know that your progression is being recognized, even though its a bit shameful. graffiti- everything u got is layed out and on the line. completely open. nothing matters but the shit u lay down. its beautiful.
soze your sig is the true definition of the phrase BOOM HEAD SHOT!!!! yea i completely agree with you like i look back at like all the earlier notebooks i filled and was like shit....i was gonna paint that??those weren't ritalin pills were they..... and you think at the time its such a great idea and its revolutionary and amazing when in the back of your mind your like i'm gonna hate myself for doing that in a few months.... and just so mods dont dlete my pointless nastalgia shit sore just dont make the e at the end sooo big which u have a habit of doing
i like it.if you're a bomber,the short name is the way to go.i write jose and on my throwies i shorten it to "JO".jose is sort of a memorial to my dead bro,joseph.