big sashi... not feelin the s, i think the e and n have potential though. don't invert it next time and maybe don't put that high heel shoe lookin extension on the bottom left leg of the n. i like the overall artsy feel and background though, just work more on your letters.
the fill design is nice, simple but eye catching . . i like your letters just never felt your Ts thoo . .
Damn you and me are like butt-buddies. Fuck writers block View attachment 244707 [/b][/quote] me too. mostly y i havent been posting. it doesnt feel right to be posting posting if i dont have something of my own to contribute, and recently it just hasent been coming. o well. keep going.. . . . tricks, i actually love those letters except for the R. the C is so simple yet dope with the bottom flairing. and knews. the n is a bit small, but even so its ill. and ur flairs are expertly done. awwww fuck. peace.
wtf seems like everyone been havin writer's block, including myself, hate this ish, finally got a decent sketch...crits? and yes the karak is wearin socks lol. [Broken External Image]:http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2959/dsc0123tc2.jpg throb-make simple block letters like on your keyboard.
throb- seems a bit too simple sumoe- the lil dude look raw i did this for a chick in my class says Floresca [Broken External Image]:http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/3850/florescagraffminisc0.jpg
trash...dope as always, although i would connect some limbs of letters so it not so much over lapping, but thats just me throb...those are really sloppy and the proportions are bad, sketch block letters first sumoe...that charac is dope, im likin the forcefield too ziareone...not so crazy about that the fill is a little too busy for me. another one i did still messin around with differnet things, i think this is the best r ive done so far though... View attachment 244711 crits?advice?
me too. mostly y i havent been posting. it doesnt feel right to be posting posting if i dont have something of my own to contribute, and recently it just hasent been coming. o well. keep going.. . . . tricks, i actually love those letters except for the R. the C is so simple yet dope with the bottom flairing. and knews. the n is a bit small, but even so its ill. and ur flairs are expertly done. awwww fuck. peace. [/b][/quote] wow freakin nice 3d I need to get some tips...my is gettin a little better...but very nice even with writer's block...
[Broken External Image]:http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/944/p1010037qg2.jpg ummm can i please get some crits> bouncingsoul-your shits just as sick as the time i commented that same piece b4 haha Ziare-wayyyyy to complicated of a fill and do some much more basic leters
View attachment 244718 View attachment 244719 View attachment 244720 critique's welcome...and apreciated thanx walshy
well i think that you really need to stick to copying letters off of your keyboard for awhile, there is little to no letter structure in the first two pieces. also work on your handstyle, mostly just keep sketchin and workin on the basics! now i accidetally posted this in the toy other art thread, but im pretty sure it goes here. some characs that are goin on some stickers, cept the bottom right one i use as a throw. tell me what you think [Broken External Image]:http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/1029/dsc02020vf4.jpg
waishy-simples,simples and more simples once u get those down then u can move on. beke-eh a little too plain add sum detail, but they look pretty good.
What up guys? It's been forever since I've been on here, but I've still been writin'. Here's something I did last week, just wanted some crits. Any thoughts? [Broken External Image]:http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/945/picture1qh7.png
[Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/472/frame00099wq2.th.png I liked this one, favourite one ive done so far. Crits please ?
Letterforms are nice, simple and readable. My only crit would be to stay away from the more complicated fills until later.
Yeah... Thanks for doing my name better than I can do it. You make me look like an asshole. :lol: haha..On the real tho. It's fresh. Thanks Tricks! Sore- Amazingly enough, I think you may be one of the few people who paint better than you sketch. The top piece looks good. The bottom one is generic. Keep it up tho. Alka- the bottom pointiness seems a little...heavy metal. I dunno. Not really feelin it yet. But it aint all bad. Roll RTS- I try not to be a dick when I crit. You aren't on the right path with that. It's just not... I dunno. Just go back to simples. I know, it's boring, but yeah, just go back. please. :wub: Walshy- read what I wrote to Roll... ^_^ Damnit... I'm addicted to emoticons.... :blink: ...damnit. Old wackness with a fresh coat of ink... [Broken External Image]:http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/9067/im000506lz4.jpg Tried sumthin noo... [Broken External Image]:http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7880/im000508un6.jpg