stroke- i like that a lot keep it up nems- i dunno if i like the letters as much as i like the colors. that shadow fill is nice ras- thats looking great man. btw did you know there is a site where you can print out blank train outlines for you to sketch on. i forgot the site but its pretty cool anyway heres a sketch of mine crits please
Alright, for the last couple of days ive noticed too many pictures and not enough feedback, it seems kinda ridiculous to have to give people warnings for not giving feedback, but thats what im going to have to do from now on I suppose its not your obligation to give feedback, but if you dont, dont expect any back, and DEFINITELY don't bump your stuff past others, begging for advice to be on the safe side, give advice to everyone on the page, i dont expect 5 minute breakdowns ( thanks to the people who give them ) but i do expect something. I'm going to start deleting / editing peoples posts who begin to violate this rule on a regular basis, and i know whos been here and whos new, so all you kids who have been here longer, smarten up And on that note wookie ive never been a fan of vanishing point 3D where you can ACTUALLY see the point, it makes it look childish and sloppy, try making your vanishing point behind one of your letters, or cut it short, makes it much more beieveable secondly, that styles kinda cool as something simple, but it can only go so far, especially because the K inst closed off lke the other letters at the bottom, i like the way you do the O's though, and think if you rounded them off theyd be good throwup letters, my suggestion is to go back to letters just like the ones on your keyboard, nice and straight, and in a line, but hey, its up you
Iv read ALOT of stuff about this crittin buisness...and its all true...im kinda getting fed up of people asking for crits without givin them themselves.. <_< ..iv all ready been doing this..but dont expect crits off me if you dont give any out .. and it pisses me off more becuase i ALWAYS give out crits and try to help people out.. :angry: ill post this again becuase i dint get any crits.. <_< Stroke...iff you got letter structure down...well...your not far away...that will be a doppee style.. Nems..the R is dope..and i always wodered..how do u do that 3d design..?...its really old skool seks...youv herd it before..nice style [/b][/quote] i think he might hav got that style from smug... cuzz if u paid attention ta graff u wud have noticed that right away....and ras how cum ive never seen ANY of ur shit posted? :blink: :huh: <_<
OO shi this is RAS \/ \/ \/ \/ down there....and i dont understand how he can go around the forums callin canadain writers TOY? <_< [Broken External Image]:http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/3674/dsc003435xn.jpg...
look ballbag, ive give ras my fair share of beastings over the net, and he IS improving. that isnt his shit, at least not recent. he posts his shit at leas once a day u bum. ras once agaiin im just not really feeling it, sorry. the 3d is easy, you do normal 3d, then just do ovals in it and colour the outsides of em black. wookie, like tricks said, lose the vp 3d going right to the vp, and if ur going to work with dark fill colours either use inlines, or a white-silver outline. cant see the outlines when its too dark. entri, post up or shut up bitch
yeh dont bring up old sketches thats jus stupid, plus wat thats?? like the first sketch he ever posted it aint guna be great, jesus u shud see mine. wookie dont do that thing wid the vanishing point cut the letters before they reach the point ras i dont like your letters, but hey great minds think alike.......... View attachment 244946
cases, i always liked ur pieces. i say u go try painmt em and wen u got suficient can control, u shud start sketchin more complex shit...
Stitch- Those are wicked letters. Nice overall shape. I've always been partial to those vlack and whites with a red outline too. Mith- Good old school stuff. The bottom right extension of the M needs to be brought down a bit. I like the crew letters attacthed on the end. Nems- That "User" piece is really fresh. Love the letters. The S coulda been pushed a bit further tho. It's kinda lacking the freshness of the other letters. You have a kinda "aliens" feel to your work. Wookie- That's WAYY old school. Even the colors. Good hand on blocks. Not my favorite, but it's fun. Caser- that simple style is locked dowen well for you. Great handle on letter flow. Your style would look good on freights because it's so easily readable, kinda like Mber's work (he's a freight king who always does simples so people can read it from a mile away at 40 miles an hour) Tricks- Go easy on the warnings.. Only heavy offenders. We don't wanna suspend everybody, but I feel you. It's tough to hold this many people to the rules. Just try your best. Anybody who posted while I typed this- sorry if you didn't get crits. A clever bump. I posted this sketch last night, but added a sticker I did for Remiks pack, so it's like a new flick. B) B) [Broken External Image]:http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6974/im000510td4.jpg
can i suggest something mate? no? well tough, listen anyway lol. on ur top M, you got he wee arrow in the bottom of the letter, going into all 3 legs, well i think it would be mint if u put the arrow facing up, at the top of the M, then the 2 stright sections on the top of the M now could go on the bottom? just dont think it looks right how they joined. and btw im loving the style, never seen anything like it..
I really like your styl. But i think you have to look at the letter structure. and the addons you put on. Make sure you put them on the right places so people wont think they see other letters. (for example the H that looks al little bit like the K) With the letter stucture i mean the way you shape your letters. For example the C Of you make the bottem al little bit longer and the top a little bit shorter it looks really good. Hope you can do something with this. (also the T is not really right shaped (i dont say its not nice or something) but the upper part is longer than the bottem. with the upper part i mean the line that cros the t frem left to right and with the bottem part i mean the really bottem of the ''t'')
I've added it a little bit. (only the bottems) I think you have the make some lines fatter to make ik look more thight [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9578/zzzzuy1.jpg Also put a little bit more detail in the bubbles Than make 2 or 3 big bubles but make 10 little bubbles on one place. Hope this helps you. (what i wanne say in the immage is that you have to look more at your letter structure and make them more ''One'' with the other lines in the letters and the extensions)
wookie- the vanishing point 3d is nice but work on the letters. the fill is cool though. mith- i like it alot as usual but the the modifications that sane made make it look nicer. caser- shits real nice. stay up cezr- man that remik piece is fresh. i dont really like the R that much but all the other letters are sick with very cool fill and extensions. post up a colored version, good shit.
word to sane heed that advice!!! cezr that stuff is real nice same as nemz aint seen a style like that before u goin to colour that? finnished the first page of ma new black book: View attachment 244949
B) Near Yes Yes Yes, well this is a new name , really hard to do 3D with this one time will show with it. Crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9198/picture201iq4.jpg <-- might be a bit big. Rasssssssssssssss!! wohhooo top of the page
Hilo...whut you mean RAAASSSS... ASB...dope shit man..really nice..that R is realll fire.. SANE...much thanks...ill have it up soon...thanks man Nemz...thank for the info about the 3D man... and.. ENRTI...what the fuck you chatting...man...that flick you posted was done in like january 2006... <_< ...and when have i ever called anyone a TOY...let alone in Canada...even if i did...i prpbably never meant it..becuase im toy..you prick
^^^^^its tall... thats good I know I know no color <_< [Broken External Image]:http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/6223/0118071244ga5.jpg critz?