ESO...>> READ THE RED IN MY SIG...YOU SHOULD ALSO DO YOUR NEXT PEICE LIKE THIS << .. EYES....that tthorw is gooood Bawk....gritty itty shizle.. Untracker...>> READ THE RED IN MY SIG...YOU SHOULD ALSO DO YOUR NEXT PEICE LIKE THIS << ..
untracked21 its tight for ur first sketch just work on keepin the n's the same size i myself aint really feeling the e either maybe mor like the n's clean lines u kno also the eyes throw is ill as fuck Fube
bump...for crits... <_< SANE...what you mean by the arrows.. ?? :unsure: .. to add on to the legs..they look kindaaa wierd..too [/b][/quote] I dont say you should use that arrows. Maybe you can put some little of the arrow style in your style. But actually i just had to go so i wanna give you something little so you can think a bit on what you should change. Next time i'll help you more. I also tried to put some extensions on your letters but it won't work. I have to think a little bit more.
not to be a dick but ur no better than ghost and i cant even read that trowie.....thank you come again!
Make the thicknesses of your lines consistent, if they get wider they have to get consistently wider until they end, the exception to this rule is adding flare around heavy corners. Just be tasteful and you will go far.
I dont say you should use that arrows. Maybe you can put some little of the arrow style in your style. But actually i just had to go so i wanna give you something little so you can think a bit on what you should change. Next time i'll help you more. I also tried to put some extensions on your letters but it won't work. I have to think a little bit more. [/b][/quote] Dude its nice dont listen to these guys, dont do add ons yet man. Bring the T out its overlapped by the letters on either side. You've got the structure down pretty much, just keep it simple and experiment, I wouldnt mind seeing a bit of angle in those letters too, try to perfect it before moving into anything fancy bro, probly what a lot of kids make the mistake of doing, but your on the right track. Keep sketching! peace
Make the thicknesses of your lines consistent, if they get wider they have to get consistently wider until they end, the exception to this rule is adding flare around heavy corners. Just be tasteful and you will go far. [/b][/quote] Back to simples. Lose the arrows forget the colour till and stuff till you get ur letters down. Your 3D is really all over the place remember when doing 3d to make sure its where it should be and on the right angle, but i dont think ur quite up to that yet. Good luck bro
[Broken External Image]:http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/kreo.jpg Been inactive for some while. Beginning to forge my own style methinks. Took 30 - 40 secs to draw. Timing myself to do fast throws. Wondering if this would be a possible style to expand on in pieces? Crits and Comments? ESO: It's not the shitty cam, it never is. Back to basics. Looks like a bunch of squiggly lines. BAWK: BONNNERRRR!
I'm deciding between laughing at you, or loling at you. HAHHAAHHAHAH!LOLOLOLOLOL! Guess what? I did both.
WHOAREHTEEVIL...that throw is hooottttt kore...go simple...you need to define the letters waaaay more.. so..i was bored and shit..so i decided to look through my old peices...back then i didnt have letter stucture or fuck all down...compared to my recent stuff..it sucked..and i could see that i had improved in most departments..so i ecided to test my letter structure with some crazy peices..i did about 3 and this was my fav...i think its a good style too.. View attachment 245148 Crits Thanks ! # Oh and dont worry...if it isnt good enough..ill go back to my other stuff..
I havent really posted much of my stuff lately, but heres the best of my latest book. [Broken External Image]:http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/3606/p000tt8.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/5539/p001dr1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/3991/p006bk9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/9726/p009oj6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1677/p002nh5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/5170/p015kp1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/16/p016es3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/8618/p018mz7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/9231/p029ij4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/8779/p028wv7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/682/p030ar3.jpg Good Crits would be MUCHLY appreciated!
naw man its pretty poor. u are going to commit suicide when ur orange and green run oout KORE TWO - fuck man clean it up A LOT
Yo i like this. But the T is still hidden, im not feelin it as much as the simpler one though, keep on at it though, and maybe change the shape of those arrows, they are too thick. Lookin good
SEKZ- y the fuck should anyone say a goddamn word about you, when u cant be bothered to help out someone else? give crits b4 asking for them. MITH- im just constantly confused about how u manage to keep yelling at ppl like kore to go simple, and then absolutely refuse to take your own advice. . . . (hint hint) fuck fuck fuck writers block. shit school skribbles. i oughta kill myself cuz this T. christ it even looks worse bigger up here. gonna color this in, i think itl look aiight kind of for bouncingsoul/knews. lol. shit but u know. . . . ran outta space to. and the E is just miserable. i think its kind of cool for such a skribbly kind of thing. finally, my fucking beautiful handwriting in latin class. haha. i suppose id like some crits too. haha do we even really need to say that? everyone wants crits. everyone wants attention. haha. tots. peace.
i like alot but , stop overlapping like keep it more cleannnnnna (alive). RASIAIAIA man i love that it just seems the t is hiding it needs to come out so it isnt shy.
Alive..i have been taking " my own advice " and yours too for the past month.. <_< ..like i say...it was just a test to see about my letter strcuture...your sutff is grimey asusaul..nice.. alive...and SEKS hellped my out alot on the last page And NEMZ...was that directed at meh..? :blink: