sry. . . but to me, that doesnt count. besides. why not? its nice to give crits. when did i say nething abt wut u said? in my book, its courtisy (fuck sp) to give crits to others on the same page ur asking for them. honestly though, its real nice. i think ur smoother shit is the best, the raggedy edges lose the flow. now go and give meeee crits. lol. PEACE. PS. EDIT. ok ras fair enough, i havent been around, i dont feel right hanging around without anything of my own to contribute. i looked back and u have, and its been real nice, the shit on the last page looks great. ur getting it down.
Wo...Alive..thanks..its great to get crits like that off the more advanced writers..well..for some dumb reason..i think you know loadsa shit becuz you live in NY.. :lol: <_< .. and i just got ROCKY BALBOA...oh yes..get in !!.. !!
dude i cant even bleive what ur talkin i did give ras crits on THIS PAGE and its the start of the fucking page anyway. fuck crits anyway man when u think about it graffiti isnt for anyone else or for props its for ya fuckin self, theres no such thing as graff by the book, and if there was so cunt would have written the book and all the shit in the world would be the same, graffiti to most people is like freedom, but now u cunts are givin it rules, and that shit is straight up wack. [/rant] anyway ill help u out if i can ok buy a pencil and a rubber, it helps u get clean stuff without sketchy pen lines, u cant really see whats goin on when its like a sketchy draft lookin thing and that I is used way to much, break free from the common shit and try to invent your own shit, thats what ive tried to do, but u cant really expect anyone to dig ur style cuz its not like theirs. Personally i think ur shit is generic and bland, theres no real attempt at originality. peace
pretty sure it was for me. dunno why though, i always give him good feedback. and the fact that i used green and red cuz they were the only pscas i had in the last 2 days.
this page sucks. new name new style. The Leg of the R is a big to high but ill get it down there the next one Crits. Ras i like ur shit dont go simpler just bring the T out and yer good. [Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/3541/picture204ff1.jpg Moter. with out teh E
Hilo change the leg of the R so it is attached to the rest of the letter! that would clean it up a lot
How said i needed to so simple lol...the shit iv been doing is simple.. :blink: ..any way..i think that you sould practtice those letters in a simple block form...so you can get your letter stuctures down..then go back to that style...becuase its a SICK form of european style...listen to me or dont lol...but thats what i think you sould do..you have potetial in that style..just get the lettters down and after that fuck off crit..i may aswell bump my shit.. View attachment 245163 Crits ? oh and this is just a peice to test my letter structure..
no offense but i really don't like it, seems like u got too many pointless lines that ruin it, arrows aren't workin for me either jus my two cents.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/59593 similar, no? [/b][/quote] wait all the stuff you posted is seriously you..... i remember you being alot better
should be doin this tomoro and yea i just realised i forgto a bit o 3d on the right of the h Nice mith just a few bits jutting out here and ther kinda spoils it on the T and between the M and the I
hey people...shut the fuck up trash i dont like how the s is skinny at the top and really thick extension coming off it mith i hate arrows but thats just me so id say take out the arrows like on the m and the little things at the top of the m and other leters wher eits like an extension coming out and a smaler one ontop just looks weird to me and dont make the i so bunched up i thick you just take out a majority of the extensions not all but some of them dont add the the piece IMO and i cant stop looking at your sig its soo sweeet.... hilo its really cool but im not seeing the t...and i could see how th r is an r but its stretch define it more
Trash - Don't like how the T is connected to the R, quick fix tho if you want to, but other than that it's fire... Ras - I don't like it. I think you should more ease yourself into add ons rather than throwing em everywhere... Hilo - Sick shit as usual... Just some advice - When I have writers block I just do single letters and work on new styles. If that doesn't work for anyone else then oh well, I tried. Had finals, took adderol, finished early, sketched. Here's the result: [Broken External Image]:http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/A.jpg A [Broken External Image]:http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/134067235_436622657_0.jpg C [Broken External Image]:http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/E.jpg E [Broken External Image]:http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/S.jpg S On the E and the S I was just fucking around with the cracks. So what do ya think?
Hahahaha i clicked on the link in your sig hahaha thats awsome :lol: but yeah im definatley liking those letters.
It is clean all thanks to adderol...Anybody else take this stuff that don't have ADD or ADHD to help them sketch???
Ya but when I get writers block I just sketch single letters and then put them together when the writers block goes away. And that wasn't supposed to spell out ACES when I started. I did the S, then the C, then the A, then the E...haha I didn't notice till I put the letters underneath the sketches when I posted them here and then I just switched em around so they spelt ACES