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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Mr. Lefty

    Mr. Lefty Senior Member

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  2. Stim

    Stim Senior Member

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    It's not bad, try a diffrent color combination though. clean up those lines too.

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    EDIT: Done in pencil, nothing serious... just fucking around with lettering. Orange and black marker accents, crits please.
     
  3. shithead onerzzzz

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    first of all word up to all the 12oz sluts. and thanks a whole lot sky5 i get what your talking about and ill be fucking with tabs soon. also if your talking about some bars in the S being dispreportional well that was coz i did it sort of quick coz i just wanted to focus on extensions. so yeh preportions are indeed annoying haha.

    ill post something in a couple of hours thanks again peace.
     
  4. inkbits

    inkbits Senior Member

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    Apoc Dozer bring your M in closer man, gap is all good but there's none prior to that which makes the letter too prominant. Other then that it aint too bad bro in the scheme of things. Maybe forget about drop shaddow/3d for now just concentrate on letter shape and keep playing around with it changing it up some till you get a feel.
     
  5. Mr. Lefty

    Mr. Lefty Senior Member

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    lol.. "changing it up some til you get a feel" ^^^

    Anyway.. I'm leaving tomorrow morning to go to MPLS until Friday.. some tattoo convention... me and plumererer were supposed to have a battle.. i sent him my piece and he hasn't said shit yet.. if the poll goes through, yippee!, if not.. it's postponed until I return.
     
  6. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    Sky5, Nice, I don't really know what to say about it because it's soooo far ahead of my level.

    Kez, Try and make the letters a little more straight, like look at the left leg of the 'K', it's all zig-zagy going upwards, some movement is good but it will come with practice. The 'E' overall is faaaar too skinny. The 'Z' isn't too bad actually.

    Anyways, first sketch in a while...

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    EDIT: Fuck does anyone else have this problem of doing a sketch and you're thinking to yourself 'This is pretty good for me', then you take a picture, upload it, and then post it and realise it's terrible...I'm gonna leave mine up for crits anyways.
     
  7. levans

    levans Senior Member

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    kaset work on your letter structure and try make each letter consistant in size length width etc
     
  8. weldo

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  9. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    fuckin hellll thats dope :eek:

    my favourite sketch from you, every single letter is on point and just plain DOPE, ill have a proper nemz up for you in a bit, sorry if i didnt give advice to people above me, ill edit this post when im back from school
     
  10. KoreTwo

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    [Broken External Image]:http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/SkullStencils.jpg

    First attempt at real stencilling. Any crits would be much appreciated. Done with markers... No spray paint around.

    Weldo: Like the top one a lot more. Second one you could have prolly changed the color scheme a bit to make it look better. But i like taht style. Like a bunch of lil ETs or shit liek that.

    Kaset: Letter structure needs work. A lot of work. And sizing as well, in ceratin places.
     
  11. inkbits

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  12. CoKKeYONe

    CoKKeYONe Senior Member

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  13. CoKKeYONe

    CoKKeYONe Senior Member

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  14. MithOnerLfcGy

    MithOnerLfcGy Banned

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    like the top one...dope handy..what you use for those highlights.. ? ;)

    CEZR....that bunch of sticks of fucking beautiful...soo colourful
     
  15. CoKKeYONe

    CoKKeYONe Senior Member

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    i used white gel pen for that highlights ;) tnx for crit
     
  16. MithOnerLfcGy

    MithOnerLfcGy Banned

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    lol...i carnt find one anywere...!! .. annoying :angry:
     
  17. DocterX

    DocterX Senior Member

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    Weldo- Those are DOPE. Soooooo Fucking Clean. So fucking Fresh. Lovin That Style Man.

    KoreTwo- Dont Necessarly like the stencil it has potential and i know its pretty difficult to make a nice a working stencil but keep at it man youll get it. Try making less breaks in the stencil. it will end up looking alot cleaner in my opinion.

    Inkbits- Good call on the beer bottle. Its a good throw. The extesions have purpose but they look alittle weird how they flow all together. Like the way the bottom of the Y goes all the way through the E. Dont like that part to much but its deffinatly better then anything ive done.

    CoKKeYONe- The Second one is my favorite. That shit is DOPE. Youve got mad Style.

    Keset-You deffinatly need to work on your structure. Everythings all over the place but it seems youve taken notice of this already. Im sure youve heard it before and will here it again. Stick with those simple letters just tweak it however you want. Just keep them all one size and nice and clean.

    Those are my long ass list of critz hah. Ill have some shit up later.
     
  18. aces

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    Weldo - Pretty sick style you got goin on but I am not really feelin the M.

    Cokkeyone - Likin the handy and the "black book" but the throwie not so much. It doesn't really have a style that goes throughout the whole thing and looks like a mix of styles. On the piece don't have the 3-D overlapping the letters because it just makes it look more toy then it needs to.

    Inkbits - Lovin it except those two dots at the beginning which I'm guessing are supposed to be an I??? If so that is the only letter that doesn't flow with the rest.

    Kore - Your coloring makes it look like you are a 2 year old...It's alright but would definately look better with paint.

    Nemz - I'm lovin every bit of it...Especially that A.

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    CAER pencil outline for an exchange with alive. Will ink it asap. Alive sorry about the lateness...Forgot that I had a midterm on Monday so I had to study.

    Crits???
     
  19. T45K

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  20. aces

    aces Elite Member

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    Alright you're new here so maybe you didn't see the rule but...BEFORE ASKING FOR YOUR OWN CRITS...AND BUMPING YOU OWN SHIT...GIVE OUT CRITS TO THE OTHER PEOPLE ON THE PAGE FIRST !!!
    COPY AND PASTE TO YOUR SIG TO SPREAD THE WORD !!

    It's in my sig...You gotta give crits to everyone on before you on the page before you get your crits...I'm gonna crit you but then make a post and crit the people above you in your next post...After this warning you won't get crits if you don't give them though.

    Well the T is really small compared to the A so keep your proportions straight...Also the A kinda looks like an R cause the right leg is soo much bigger than the left leg...other than that it's good...Nice drop shadow and the TA to the right is pretty good...Reminds me of JA a little...Add some shadow to the TA and get rid of the little water drop to the side cause from what I can see it is pretty bad (they are hard to get really nice and consistent)...other than that I think it's ready to paint...


    [Broken External Image]:http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/134745653_438979950_0.jpg
    CAER pencil outline for an exchange with alive.

    BUMP for crits???