what the fuck is he supposed to crit? haze, i think youre going for wildstyles to early. your lines are really choppy and your letters dont look like the letters theyre supposed to be.
[Broken External Image]:http://ourworld.cs.com/Easymac160/Hems6.JPG That girl is hot...that's my crit, *Yes this is a sloppy drawning, I know, and the m sucks pretty bad.
heres some shit i jsut sketched... HASK [Broken External Image]:http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7652/hask48ob.jpg HASK [Broken External Image]:http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9945/hask53sf.jpg actually here's a better wildstyle and my hand style.... http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/6633/hasksketch7bo.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5648/haskhandstyle9wo.jpg i need alott of help with straight letter plz gimmie some help and any advice on the handstyle would b helpful...thks
[Broken External Image]:http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/Picture357.jpg comments? criticism?
Hask- I suck at throwes so I can't crit that, but with the second picture, make your lines straight, simple, blocky. Hems- I like that H, but not feeling the sloppiness or the other letters, just clean up a bit Gesc- Lose that little knobby on the C and make your letters lighter, then go darker over them, 'cuz they don't erase all the way and look sloppy. Last night's sketch. View attachment 246126
Hot Pocket, Nice straight letters, one thing to watch out for though is if you're going to angle your letters they ever have to be perfectly on teh same angle or all on quite different angles if you get what i mean, otherwise it looks awkward. No one else on the page gave crits... Page of simples, constructive comments would be appreciated. [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch27.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/3889/12222135py.jpg finally got some new bbooks on the cheap, now all i need is new markers . . the bottom one looks like 2 stickies on a blank page caset those are some good basic simples . . never a fan of the top S thoo
Caset- That looks good just keep doin simples like that. Sky 5- Look, you just need to take the advice everyone else has already said in this thread. You need to do some simples man thats the only way you'll get better. Just kidding. your stuffs crazy, as always. Really inspiring. How long have you been writing for? Hot Pocket - Try and make your letters straighter, they look like they're falling down. Just did this now for a battle, took a break from studying for midterms: Crits/comments please I'm really trying to improve.
not bad man . . ive def seen better 3d from you thoo . . the L and E 3d seem to work more than the U and C . . the lil orange part on the E needs to be cleaner and maybe bigger . . it look slike you approach 3d the same way i do which is reassuring b/c it seems when you get into teh true 3d your in the deep end of the pool with lil help . . . the E on the 2d doesnt seem to fit the other letters style, maybe b/c it is roundy and has no sharp edge on it like the other letters . . the black shade on the C doesnt look right to me, maybe should have done a red or darker orange . . maybe i say maybe too much
ooohhh man!!! loving the newish look...it's about time you tried rounding out some of your shit and changing up your color schemes. i'm so incredibly in love with the sketches. thank you for making my life that much better.
[Broken External Image]:http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1917/shittyhask0ah.jpg i just did this..... it sucks soooo bad plz help!!
Thanks for the crits, the O was more of a last minute thing 'cuz I didn't think I had enough room to fit it. As for them falling down, I'll make them straight up next time. Sky- I never was a fan of your fills, but I really like that top one
Thanks so much for the crits, means a lot coming from you. Yeah the black on the C looked wrong to me too right after I did it, but there was no going back haha. Thanks for the crits though. What did you mean by this? Is that a good or bad thing? haha. Edit:Top of the page BUMP (I already gave out crits to the last page):