that is nice man ...I am just starting but for "crits" all good here

 

Thanks and all.. but I just cannot copy stuff on the screen <_<.. I'll just write my name over and over and see what comes out.. [/b][/quote]
the whole point is to get some ideas not use that exact tag.... thats what this thread is for to learn new shit and get ideas...

 

the whole point is to get some ideas not use that exact tag.... thats what this thread is for to learn new shit and get ideas... [/b][/quote]
Yeah I know.. but I can't copy any ideas for shit haha.. nevermind.. I just need to make the D and the R clearer and the o bigga..

 

ROYALE: resize!
its looking good, but you m i just to plain and akward looking. give it some "flair"
ya know

 

Ok guys, I know.. I suck.. whatever.
Give me some Crit on some of these.. I'm not looking to get chirped on it and shit like that. I already know it sucks...



^^^ I drew this up in about 15 seconds. ^^^

 

What you have drawn there sir is called a "throwie" or a "throw-up" Notice how the thread says Toy Tagz..only

 

Thats a pretty nice trhowie, its kind of a style that i use, but i just started and hahah yeah ur no toy

 

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let me know if you like it

 

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KRITZ YAALL, spit em out, i know u got some, BAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNN h34r:

 

Im working on a new tag, cause thet one looks shatty when i write it fast, my new one is easier to read, ill snap a pic soooon



PS: BALLIINN??

 

Hey " NEWBIE " whats that say, it flows but i hate when ppl cant read my shit man, PROPS

 

you talking to me? if so it says cear
not that hard to read...

 

yea just look at my sig...a bathroom in Atl.....mad drips

 

Kerf is the only one that gave some sort of crit in the last 10 posts.

Kerf, Everything looks too sharp dude, try and get it to flow some more, loosen up your arm a bit. Your marker should move around the paper like butter in a hot frying pan, nice and smooth.

Anyways, a couple from me, constructive comments would be good, cheers.

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oh my bad i didnt know I had to give to get...
d_g i like it it seems to have good flow
Rank- looks ok but try it without any addons and also maby bring the k down a lil bit so it flows a lil better
Kerf-I agree with what d_g said

 

cear as in alive?

 

huh?

 

if u aint alive then u wouldnt kno wat im talking about. thers a caer on this site already and he rocks it better than you. duno wat u wana do about that.