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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. etch a sketch

    etch a sketch Senior Member

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    mag no crits for u since u don't crit anyone!! <_<
     
  2. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    stop no.
    no no no.
    thats not good,
    and its not simple,
    it has bad structure, if you can even say that, and is too complex.
    write your word like T H I S. the letters on your keyboard, BOTH of you.

    mag-you too. your trying to strech your letters and such but you cant yet, it looks bad.
     
  3. mag.oner

    mag.oner Member

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    why yes, i shall crit more often ;), aighty lets see

    Dim - Yuor structuring is madd jagged and not the same in all 3 letters, try to keep your structure fluent throughout DIM. Your letters are ehhh, to cramped and your color is too complex, keep it simple, too much neons give people headaches @-@

    RustyBurrito - The style is there, but i feel like theres something missing when i look at it, maybe the fact that its too skinny ?... try to fatten up the letters, it will touch up the look a bit, and throw some color in it :)
     
  4. mag.oner

    mag.oner Member

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    another throwie.

    i know it sloppy, its late... :lol:


    ai14.tinypic.com_2vl1bah.gif
     
  5. RustyBurrito

    RustyBurrito Senior Member

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    I see zero letter structure in there. Tone it down
     
  6. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  7. Rank!

    Rank! Member

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    yo ! I tried to improve my throwie...give me crits on which one you like
    ThankS!!!
    ai146.photobucket.com_albums_r258_rank1234_throwie.jpg
    Yo i also need you guys to tell me besides the crapy highlighter fill whats wrong with the letter structure in this...
    my first sketched peice...
    ai146.photobucket.com_albums_r258_rank1234_surgerank.jpg
     
  8. RustyBurrito

    RustyBurrito Senior Member

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    The 3d is really off in the last one...might just be me though.
     
  9. Slushi

    Slushi Banned

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  10. sheist

    sheist Senior Member

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    i def think the bottom one is a huge improvement

    keep up the work

    ai14.tinypic.com_449u9lj.gif

    not much of anything, just a new throwie for a new name and im just seeing how the general idea blows over with you guys
     
  11. Rank!

    Rank! Member

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    i think that shit will look good if you can canstantly keep the same widths in the letters and the same character faces


    _slushi the top one looks like it would be real tight but i cant see it too well..blurry pic
     
  12. C3ZR ONE

    C3ZR ONE Moderator

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    Rank- Like I said before, the throwies are alright, as far as the pieces structure, if you go back to blocks and simples, you'll understand the structure of the letters you're trying to use so much better and then you'll understand why the structure an flow of that kinda....sucks. The blue piece is alright. The colored piece is just a mess. Give crits before asking for them. ;)

    Shiest- not much to say about it. It's not terrible, but it just seems kinda generic, like most of the throwies you see in here. Throwies are difficult, and it's hard to get one with a real signature flavor that's all your own, but that's what you want to try to acheive.

    Whahappen- read the above post... I personally think you're a nice guy and a pretty good member, but I'd really like to see you go all out and put some real effort into a sketch. So much of what I see from you looks the same. Keep at it tho. You'll get there. ;)

    Slushie- I like your style. I wish like hell you didn't have the worlds worst digital camera so I could actually see these flicks.. :lol:



    Overall the last couple pages have been lookin kinda rugged.. Lets step it up guys. Push yourselves hard and see what you can come up with....

    Inkbits- that doesn't apply to you. Your shit is hot.



    So Ceezah, whacha been up to?
    Oh, just a bunch of mediocre crap myself.. I'm kind of at a stuck point, and trying really hard to get out of the slump... :( Here's what I got....

    [Broken External Image]:http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/192/im000550ej5.jpg
    One for the Inkster... :wub:


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    [Broken External Image]:http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/609/im000555cw1.jpg
    I'm not even coloring this crap in... <_<

    [Broken External Image]:http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/2301/im000554ul5.jpg

    [Broken External Image]:http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/5981/im000552vz4.jpg
    unadulterated wackness...

    [Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/6774/im000551ej6.jpg

    s'all I got... :(
     
  13. Gist

    Gist Senior Member

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    i gave critz never got n e. Critz plzz
     
  14. etch a sketch

    etch a sketch Senior Member

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    Yea you did gist u got crits when you posted that up by someone on the next page or the page you posted that on.. and like i said before.. ur lines seem shaky..

    damn.. i can't see c3zr's pics..

    edit: nvm i can see em :lol:

    1st pic - is it "inko!"? i can't really see right now since im tired..

    2nd pic - the fill ins are cool :) but for th amuin piece i think the i's too big? ah well its good :)

    3rd pic - i like the throwie but for the piece at the bottom, the c's add'on looks like it raises the c so the c looks a ltitle small.. its good too though :)

    4th pic - i'm feelin it but why no color?

    5th pic - i like ur letter structure and the one letter with a pink for the fill in is pretty cool and i like ur outline/forceifeld thingy.. :D

    6th pic - likin it but it feels like the i's gettin squished? i dono maybe its just me :lol:
     
  15. Albert Fish

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  16. shithead onerzzzz

    shithead onerzzzz Member

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    INKBITS/CEZR: your stuff is real dope loving the colours on yours cezr especially.

    RANK: i like the ideas you have for your throws. on the second sketch try to define the letters more on the bottom of the R, N, K. just make the legs of these letters like the A and that shit will flow good.

    this is my throw, it looks quick and yucky but you get the idea. i designed it like 6months ago and i havent really got crits. tell me what you think

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  17. shithead onerzzzz

    shithead onerzzzz Member

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  18. nemzone

    nemzone Elite Member

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    bump inkbits your style is ill [/b][/quote]
    i second that. theres new favourits poppin up all over the toy forum lately :wub:
     
  19. minor crimes

    minor crimes Elite Member

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    bump this im liking it.
    inkbits, u kno that shits dope man! [/b][/quote]
    yeah nesk. how did ya find sydney aye? nice meetin up wit u ladske. neways how was down south in ur comps ???? thanks for da hit ups n yeah mad sketches. like the second one all good too
     
  20. Skeam

    Skeam Senior Member

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    cheers mate spewin we couldnt paint haha... i woulda been so fuct if i hadnt of gotten a lift home lol. went mad in the comps you already know that so yeh sick maaaate, getsome of ya sketches up bitch.