stop no. no no no. thats not good, and its not simple, it has bad structure, if you can even say that, and is too complex. write your word like T H I S. the letters on your keyboard, BOTH of you. mag-you too. your trying to strech your letters and such but you cant yet, it looks bad.
why yes, i shall crit more often , aighty lets see Dim - Yuor structuring is madd jagged and not the same in all 3 letters, try to keep your structure fluent throughout DIM. Your letters are ehhh, to cramped and your color is too complex, keep it simple, too much neons give people headaches @-@ RustyBurrito - The style is there, but i feel like theres something missing when i look at it, maybe the fact that its too skinny ?... try to fatten up the letters, it will touch up the look a bit, and throw some color in it
yo ! I tried to improve my throwie...give me crits on which one you like ThankS!!! Yo i also need you guys to tell me besides the crapy highlighter fill whats wrong with the letter structure in this... my first sketched peice...
The throws are decent. The piece has nice colors but go simple. Don't overlap your 3d. [Broken External Image]:http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/7697/picture123fo7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4169/picture122ez5.jpg crits.
i def think the bottom one is a huge improvement keep up the work not much of anything, just a new throwie for a new name and im just seeing how the general idea blows over with you guys
i think that shit will look good if you can canstantly keep the same widths in the letters and the same character faces _slushi the top one looks like it would be real tight but i cant see it too well..blurry pic
Rank- Like I said before, the throwies are alright, as far as the pieces structure, if you go back to blocks and simples, you'll understand the structure of the letters you're trying to use so much better and then you'll understand why the structure an flow of that kinda....sucks. The blue piece is alright. The colored piece is just a mess. Give crits before asking for them. Shiest- not much to say about it. It's not terrible, but it just seems kinda generic, like most of the throwies you see in here. Throwies are difficult, and it's hard to get one with a real signature flavor that's all your own, but that's what you want to try to acheive. Whahappen- read the above post... I personally think you're a nice guy and a pretty good member, but I'd really like to see you go all out and put some real effort into a sketch. So much of what I see from you looks the same. Keep at it tho. You'll get there. Slushie- I like your style. I wish like hell you didn't have the worlds worst digital camera so I could actually see these flicks.. :lol: Overall the last couple pages have been lookin kinda rugged.. Lets step it up guys. Push yourselves hard and see what you can come up with.... Inkbits- that doesn't apply to you. Your shit is hot. So Ceezah, whacha been up to? Oh, just a bunch of mediocre crap myself.. I'm kind of at a stuck point, and trying really hard to get out of the slump... Here's what I got.... [Broken External Image]:http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/192/im000550ej5.jpg One for the Inkster... :wub: [Broken External Image]:http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/5128/im000556bx8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/609/im000555cw1.jpg I'm not even coloring this crap in... <_< [Broken External Image]:http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/2301/im000554ul5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/5981/im000552vz4.jpg unadulterated wackness... [Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/6774/im000551ej6.jpg s'all I got...
Yea you did gist u got crits when you posted that up by someone on the next page or the page you posted that on.. and like i said before.. ur lines seem shaky.. damn.. i can't see c3zr's pics.. edit: nvm i can see em :lol: 1st pic - is it "inko!"? i can't really see right now since im tired.. 2nd pic - the fill ins are cool but for th amuin piece i think the i's too big? ah well its good 3rd pic - i like the throwie but for the piece at the bottom, the c's add'on looks like it raises the c so the c looks a ltitle small.. its good too though 4th pic - i'm feelin it but why no color? 5th pic - i like ur letter structure and the one letter with a pink for the fill in is pretty cool and i like ur outline/forceifeld thingy.. 6th pic - likin it but it feels like the i's gettin squished? i dono maybe its just me :lol:
INKBITS/CEZR: your stuff is real dope loving the colours on yours cezr especially. RANK: i like the ideas you have for your throws. on the second sketch try to define the letters more on the bottom of the R, N, K. just make the legs of these letters like the A and that shit will flow good. this is my throw, it looks quick and yucky but you get the idea. i designed it like 6months ago and i havent really got crits. tell me what you think [Broken External Image]:http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/CIMG0526.jpg
bump inkbits your style is ill [/b][/quote] i second that. theres new favourits poppin up all over the toy forum lately :wub:
bump this im liking it. inkbits, u kno that shits dope man! [/b][/quote] yeah nesk. how did ya find sydney aye? nice meetin up wit u ladske. neways how was down south in ur comps ???? thanks for da hit ups n yeah mad sketches. like the second one all good too
cheers mate spewin we couldnt paint haha... i woulda been so fuct if i hadnt of gotten a lift home lol. went mad in the comps you already know that so yeh sick maaaate, getsome of ya sketches up bitch.