No, not really.

 

Knivez- do somthing with that e itg dosent go like other people said

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is that carved into a desk?

 

^^ no itsz just written on it lolz.

 

PLEASE criticize and try to help. If ANYONE can help me with writing freehand NOOB then please helppp! THANKS!!!

 

Just so you know it's etiquette (or however the fuck it's spelt) on this forum to crit the people above you if you expect to get crits yourself. It's not that hard, on the posting screen just scroll down so and you'll see the last 10 posts, crit all the pictures in those 10 posts.

Anyway, try and make it a lot simpler and build from there, you're not gonna have time to do all those loopy-te-do-dad things on the street.

IMO 'Noob' is a lame thing to write, but whatever floats your boat.

 

guys, thank you for your help, but can you please tell me WHY the e does not go with everything else, explain or draw or something. thank you a lot.

 

ok so u see how everything is like semi jaged the "e" is totally curvey
no what im say

 

oh yeah, lol k, ill try and make a diff one, then ill update you guys.

 

does anyone think they can help write a noob for me or teach me how to make it better?

 

for your tag?

 

-kNiVeZ-: I basically agree with everything that was just said about yours...

Anyone?

 

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my handstyle but its not too great....critz?

 

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NOOB these rn't so great i jsut did its in a few seconds but its somthing to work off...dont bite it directy but get some idea outta it


oh lol and the one with the happy face was a joke i messed it up

 

Air- That looks good just the second leg on the R i would make it out abit further off the top. closer to the tip. if you know what i mean abit confusing.


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Thick and thin Marker, besides that hows the tag? any crits? Attemptin to get a new good one to use.

 

try to make the word straight unless u got more flow with it..if u want il draw u one up....i got a pretty tight e" for that style..

 

alka its alright
noob get a new name and start from simples
knives do simples
hask make the letters easier to read make the k bigger and dot do the extension on the s
new name zaes
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whahappenin- looks pretty good, i like the A and E just not feelin the Z and S, maybe try sum other ones out.


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Abunch of little stickers im going to put out tonight, Burrr, too cold to paint em

Crits?