props to kay for reminding you all to start simple yoga, thatd look alot nicer without being able to see all the black lines going in and out of each letter, and really, reallllly work on that handstyle, i practice my handstyle 24/7 i just have thousands of cheets of paper (literally) built up from scribbling on them, you should all do the same craze its kinda cool, but i think the fact that you used pen and did that weird fuzy outline relaly takes away from some actually decent letters and flow, try making a really clean one and see the outcome mse - exchange? dope. its settled. lol ras, finally some actual simples, you might think this is "cheating" and if you do ill knock you out, but, to get your eltters the same height and size for simples ( which makes a difference ) draw a straight line WITH A RULER ( ohhhh noooo ) somewhere a little lower in the page, and then try to make all your letters correspond to it, and sit on top of it, or dip under it a little, just so all your letters are thinkin the same thing, you understand? havent been sketchin in a while, lots of work, drunkeness etc, plus superbowls on tonight, go colts.
deffinetly on the right track IMO, nice solid simples and you got em rockin pretty well just keep doin what your doin mate.
[Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v219/Risilia/Graffiti-MERGE004-1.jpg Thoughts and ways to fix?
merge...theres really no way to fix that just start over.start by doing simple block letters like this-->"MERGE" ok, dont try to get ahead of yourself with crazy styles/addons. frat...that style looks WAY to much like sky 5 and also that says rek, sky 5 writes rek(or used to) so dont do that style/name. and i think the charac is pretty good ras...i always like your stuff, but it never really seems to change
Bumpa Lumpa Nictix....yeah...there always the same becus im not ready to change yet.. or am i .. :unsure: <_< :lol: Urban Evolutuon and FRAT..Go Simple h34r:
here is a link to my...attempt at writing, havent written for awhile and i cant figure out to get the pic up after trying a couple times...sorry, crits plz Pic here
or do that bro: (this is tezers work not mine) [Broken External Image]:http://i162.photobucket.com/albums/t256/tezer_photos/tzr.jpg magic!! btw do simple letters.
nooo...i meant the yellow in my sig.. i dont like your name...Ces...as ima huge fan of his.. but you flow is like the wind.. not like a hurricane yet tho
yo ces i think u should make ur letters a lil bit slimmer and taller an try to make the shadow smaller to so it will go wit ur letters better
Some new bullshit. Crits if you care. [Broken External Image]:http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture71.jpg vertical [Broken External Image]:http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture70.jpg pen freestyle throwie
the first one looks pretty good but the letters seem to get smaller as they go down the throw is nice.. not feelin the second one tho
SOLE - i like the last one. no so much the rest, keep 'em straight and cleann (H) thought i would colour it in, [Broken External Image]:http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/9799/105yj4.jpg