im not feeling it fail, maybe if u lost the huge dot on the i and made the k kick out a litte further

sorta like this

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but thats what i think.. im not an expert but that could make it a bit better

 

STFU u dont even luve anywherre near me [/b][/quote]
he was talkin to me. and i think you need another name change before you start makin stuff with it..

 

Ok, so this is some crap I did.. any Crit on it?

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Ignore whats ont he right.

 

the n on the second one i like and try and get some flow for the k

 

And also you could try doing something with the E. And FAIK umm yah you have to do something with that I

 

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new handy, has an angel theme (look sbetter painted)

and my tag for markers

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no halo and work on structure and above all flow

 

I like the drips on secor

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dont be too harsh, just starting out and some of my first stuff

crits please

 

Craz- Just like when you're sketchin pieces, go simpler, work off the form of the actual letter instead of adding random extensions that detract from it's natural flow, and don't write on the streets till you get it down. Here's an alphabet.


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secor really nice
craz simples
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main one^
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one im workin on

 

secor that looks fucken dope bro what sorta marker was it? kiwi mop? i wanna get me one of them thats for sure haha, i got a thing for simple tags i rekn their dope ay.

 

slEEt maybe make your S a little clearer?


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(I usually only have two quotation marks and nothing else written around it - but its in my room )

criticism please

 

zeks - try to get your letters more uniform... ie have your corners in the upper bends or lower bends.. just keep them similar as possible

also if you're going to add the bit to the ends of the k and s add one on to the c and e or take them out... gotta keep it all similar

 

blehh ur door is gunna look retarded no offense, dont put so much random stuff around it thers lik 8/10 addons that arent nessary(cant spell)

the funny thing is there is liek 10 addons lol

 

:lol: yeah i know i just got bored.. i usually only add the date, a halo and the thing u put when u end a number on a check with an exclamation mark

i know this sounds really toy, but what does this symbol mean?
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:wacko: everyone uses it

 

dog, quit doin the tag....completely remaster that ish

i take it says dok?

size it down a bit and have every leg flow with the other...tags are the gateway to a good style, a nice flow with a tag does alot for your style...and eventually your pieces

start writing it differently and practice flow, cuz right now its lacking it



and i havnt seen that symbol yet...i think your just overexagarating the star to the right of the tag

 

ok thanks, it says dor

 

eram- too much stuff around it, takes away from the real meaning of the work, which is to show ur name. So loose all the junk around it, and work on the R, cuz i agree it looks like a K.

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Crits?

 

whats it say?... i think the connections look unatural... an it kinda looks handwriting ish ish ..