code- shorten the tail on the e just a little. not much to crit man, it looks good. now go and develop a new tag.
Hoolllyy shit man. I want that fucking R. I can't get mine that good, mine look sort of similar but yours really flows. Shit, and I'm really feeling the captial E. Shit is awesome.
All right, I've given out a few crits now without posting anything. So here, crit this please. I've been expirementing with using a new more "blockish" style, instead of the usually flowy curve one. [The black dots mean it is the old style. No black dot means newer style] [Broken External Image]:http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r108/PopwarSkater143/newstyle.jpg (Sorry for the bad quality, I think the marker is dying.)
resk- you need to rewok all your letters to make them flow better together, fix your R. go back to basics a bit more it needs work before touching walls. keep practicing basic until you get the basic looking quite nice and just work your own style into it. [Broken External Image]:http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1682/dsc00090ja2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/1619/dsc00085ba0.jpg what do you think?
i would change the K, and make the $ a normal S. also try to keep the Z just as big as the other letters. [Broken External Image]:http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7803/hpim0747to7.jpg not mine, but what do you think? (don't be to harsh, this boy doesn't like crits) :lol:
kozmoe .... i dont really like it and i think you should not have the line in the s ... but its not that bad... and for ur mate sane ^^^ ... not that bad but dont have the arrows
Bump to next page...... h34r: + one more pic [Broken External Image]:http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q22/Kranks1/100_1555.jpg Sane is ok, the E bland for me, lose the arrows.
to stado - not that bad but as others said get rid of the arrows kosmo - loose the dolar sign and make the z the same size as other letters i guess
ok for one dude the fucking j looks like shit it looks like a backwards c and i was just trying to give you some advice to help you out but hey if your going to be a cunt about it fuck you.... [/b][/quote] Jroc if i was you i wouldnt be all mouthy with someone trying to help u because to be honest if i didnt know ur username i wudnt have a clue wat that says. just start off ur tag with normal flowing handritin and develop it from there because im not guna lie to you mate thats fugly. EDIT: my tag i done with a sharpie magnum [Broken External Image]:http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9681/dsc00376vq7.th.jpg crits please .
Can someone post an example of a tag with good and bad flow? I'm not reallu sure on how to get mine to flow better....
thanx for the advice but if u cant see wat it says yur fuckin blind [/b][/quote] dude how about you stop trying to be such a hardcore gangster "saying the same shit as someone before you is like double posting so you should die to." dude your a fucking moron are you seriously trying to be hardcore or are you just like 9. and my friend hardly does graffiti but he can tell its fucking horrible nase its a nice tag but i can hardly se the e cause of the white stuff around it seikt your se is huge and your other letters are tiny, and make the i's dot more circular or experiment with other ways to do a dot on the i because thats soooo over used