simples ><

edit: also what do u guys think of "mezn" as a name

 

i would bring the middle of the m down lower and mezn idk about

 

lovin it.
hell your fuckin' colorin was mad right before your letters were down, i liked dem penguins you use to do too.

 

mez squish the letters together and maybe round em off dont make em so sharp looking.


people keep tellin me my stuff looks like chillen but i guess its just the ch cus i didnt change my style and when i wrote yelser and baper no one felt that way, whatever, crits?

 

i like your shit fish man, keep it up but i suggest expanding stlyes.

 

alberto..keep up the style

the prop kill..keep up them simples..

omg..you do not realize..how hard it is..to draw..Super Mario..at 2.00 am..in the morning..in retro form..aswell as tryin to do a peice..fuck me..i feel dizzy

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not my best..but practise practice

 

you dont have to color all your sketches.. just sketch in pencil and work on your structure over and over.

 

bump..

i got told to use colour..

sank..and im obviously working on strutre as im doing S I M P L E S.. <_<..looking thru your posts..your also very quick to tell people what they should be doing..when your not exactly great yourself..and when someone does give you there opinion..you snap at them

Got Paint..England mate..

 

its 2 am where are you

 

in canada where its only 9pm

 

sorry ive been absent, ive still been cleaning up shit, ive just been lurking in the shadows and listening to nsync you feel me? on the real ras, those are the worst letters ive seen from you in a WHILE whats with the wird ass little paper folds on the ends of each letter? and that thing on your T, come on man, you can do ebtter than that

 

wo ras chill out man, i said dont color because you can practice more doing that. and i dont know when ive snapped at ppl but ok... i gave you a crit so, theres no need to be hostile.. just tryin to help.

 

im pissed.
i did this "bitch" sketch.
and the h was cramped.
but overall it was pretty decent.
then wen to color it and i guess i grabbed a DIFFERENT brown crayola, that was super dark.
and fucked it up.
so im gonna redo it in a minuteeeee.

 

thanks for the update^

 

i never bump myself and i was at the bottom so bump and ras, not really feelin it, try to do more like that hieroglyphic sketch a few thousand pages back

 

im just experimenting tricks...geez.. ...its also 2 in the morinning..ahha..
wut did u think to the letters on this peice..
also UUUh..wut do you think...you was the one who told me to do it..

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sorry for the bumps..but its for a worthy cause.. :lol:

 

This ones deffinitly better than mario pixelated one although i did like the character i have to agreee the bottom paper folds dunt look very good but the 3d style triangle looks alright Stay up and how long have u been doing them simples for Sumoe is at around 7 months and as u can see he has majorly improved also u got pic of some of ur shit from when u first started ya simples or just a bit in to it Thanx man Stay up

 

i was gonna edit a picture.
but ill do it inot this one instead.. <_<

 

yeah ras that one is wayy better.. i really like the fill
and albert fish the i was feelin the other one more than that one.

semi new style.. should i even bother to continue with it. the color really fucked it up
and yes i realize a lot of lines aren't completely even