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what dyou think of it? quick 2 min sketch.

 

all your letters are ok..but the B needs some work

you need to round up your B and make that T simple don't make the upper bar go far on the left

but keep practicing

 

**cough*** ahem.... credit where credit is due.. The karaks were mine.

I put a tag with this poster, but I think it looks wack. Should I just do big simple letters? I want it to be readable from the street. It's going on a 3 story rooftop corner.
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sorry if i post too much.. :unsure:

bump this tho..you can really see how big it is from the Hello sticker...dope handy..and cleanie as fuckie

Blunt!...ugh....one of the worse graffiti names i ever herd..no offence..and the fact that you put a blunt under you tag .. is..immature.. ..just aint feeling it at all..but your soing simples thats the main thing..just dont streth the T right over the other letters

 

thought i might gets some crits on this??
these are like 6 months old so i allready progressed a lot i guess
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dont ever rite dream.......... ever EVER again.

 

errmm,,yes <_<

trying new things
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/tor.jpg

simple throwie
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/...20L/tor0001.jpg

crits?

 

south pole- like the Tor outline. try to connect the top of the R more so its less like a K. with the throwie, i'd dont really give good advice but just make it more round and overlapping i guess. i dunno, just fuck around with that.

staro- post new shit if thats old shit. be good to see the improvement

cezr- shit dope man. the handstyle is fuckin sick, characters nice too.

 

south pole dont send us link send us pics

 

i can't cuz i don't have photoshop to resize my pics so if post them they'll
show up on the whole page of the thread

 

resize them on imagshack.us

 

Create a Flickr.com account.. upload the pics...right click on the picture's medium format and just use that URL as the image URL

 

^thanks but can i get crits

 

lol,doesn't Trane in "Getting Up" use those letters for 'his' throwies

The top piece looks cool,but I can't help feel like the thin parts on the R stand out (just noticed the file name is tor,try connecting the top of the R so it looks more R`y)as different from the rest..Makes me expect them a bit bigger or thinner areas on the T..but could just be me

 

lol at trane getting up i write torn but sometimes i take off the o


but thanks for criting though

 

yo photo bucket lets you risize if you click on the pic then under where it says click to add title theres a resize button

 

o i forgot to crit
Xsjadox - really like it
south pole - looks cool but i dont like the dash addon things ontop of the r (which kind of looks like a k) and the sides of the t

 

some one please crit my shit..

Got Paint? good to see your starting with simples its really the best way
to learn, you allready got it down pretty good just keep op practising

 

STAR01. IMHO u need to hit the fundamentals. As in.
Basic letters. U need to get all the lines the same size.
The perfect size. Copy the basically the font from the keyboard.
Draw it 100 or 200 times.
Get a good feeling of proportions. space between letters. and the style that has to be same in all the letters. It takes long time. Rushing out is the worst.