the bottem of your second B is a bit to big, the r in mr, the shoe is kinda stubby, and the D doesnt seem right to me
TheProKilla...the shoe is supposed to be stubby...cartoon like..i rekon your just nitty picking...as you never put what was wrong with the R..just looking for bad points..but thanks for pointing them out...
ras i think u can do better. not that its bad cus its not. but as i look through these pages i see the same thing over and over. nothin but respect but maybe try to progress more? btw im feelin the shoe on there. lovein that. karak is ok but hes messin up the 3d on your letters. also i might put the background all black so everything stands out a lot more, try it and see if u like it better. hhhhhh: dont worry about fills, if u look at my stuff i dont fill it because when i do i mess it up and to me it looks like shit. go a bit simpler like in south pole's post and progress from there and u will get better faster. then worry about addin flaver to your sketches. some of my scribbles. View attachment 252329 View attachment 252330 ctits are welcome, i know i gots a way to go but im gunna get there none the less.
ras dont know what to say i love almost all your stuff hhhhh really like the m dont really like the a tho the style on its a little differnt and is out of proportion colored crits?
honestly...the only good letter there is the M. but it is a pretty nice M still got no crits on mine!
Thats Like 5 people who have now told me to progress...and like 3 people who have told me to stay with the simples.. This is fucking BORING ME ! .. what shall i do..listen to the " keep on simple " or the " try to progress oooon " .. and .. if i got told to progress...hell i would want too.. !!!!! .. and i fukin knew ppl would start saying all my shit looks the same ... !!! :angry: Fube..like your style..isit been done on MS paint..it looks kinda sketchy..non the less..i like it..not liking the throw alot tho
just do what you want, thats what graffiti is about, being creative. just take other peoples advice, dont take it like theyre tellin you what to do.. its just tips. try out some things and see what you like.
ras, my advice would be, do both. stay with simples, keep doing them, but also keep experimenting at the same time. that last one you posted was nice.
looks like ms paint but its just the scanner, it scanned it as a text document and i was too lazy to change it. my bad. also when i said progress i didnt mean try wild style. i ment maybe bend your letters a bit more in places, dont space them out as much like regular type. push em together. experiment more. see if u like it better. thats what i ment. i see the same "simples" from u, make your "simples" a bit more elaborate. also i never really take crit from this forum to heart because a lot of people (includeing me) really dont have a strong grasp of style in general, they know what they like and they know what they dont like, but they dont know enough to be able to give good crit. btw i love it how i crit everyone and get none but from one person. its awesome. hate being at the bottom of the page :angry:
hey hey bs! i havent been n for time so heres a small and quick CR piece, i think i went a bit overboard but its your job to correct me! [Broken External Image]:http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/9650/107yf4.jpg crits? mezn - looks ok, not much else i can say really, sorry.
pen sketch...i dont speak spanish anyway so i draw during that class lol...n i got bored of the usual simples so w.e. edit: the paper folded over on the corner so it makes the p look mad small but w.e. no reason to re-flick it
baha lol my name just might be nelson... sluts that sketch is awesome, i just dont like the lil extension on top of the s...
Not what i actually write, just a random word. [Broken External Image]:http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6066/picture142zk4.jpg Crits?
yo you guys gotta star critting before you ask for crits G smooth if that says flava i dont really like it you cant see the second part of the F the bottom of the l is too fat the first A is almost too covered to be able to tell its and A Sluts great sketch really like it Prokilla deffinitley simple keep up with that maybe try blocks instead of bubbles crazy ammo ? im lost
Thanks Fubemister !!! :wub: .. i critted you did i not..?..yeah i think i did.. Kraze..ugh..wats going on.. :blink: Pesk..nice nice nice