lol that duck is dope [/b][/quote]
Bump...got overlooked by stupid simple talk..

React..leave it out mate..okay he bit mr.wiggles..but everyone bites..not saying its a good thing..but it happens

but i gotta admit..whut a dumb fuck bite..hahaha :lol: :lol:

Fap..do a buddy a favour..lose the F..and write ApTwo..please..your F's are shit..no offence..theyre the letter that seems to always ruin your peices..

 

its not his, code

and code, keep your letters the same thickness, notice the e

 

over looked? You got more crits than anyone else that posted


Mse- Love the first one, love the jester crown type thing. Have never seen anything of urs with a fill, do you do them?:S

 

Smoek- k this is what i am talking about, your vanishing point is everywhere you need just one lol

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Mse- dud its really nice, cant think anything is wrong

Aimo- Like everything accept the A, the right side of it is to thin for my liking.

And just a real fast question are you guys tellin gme i am biting mr.Wiggles, lol because i havent ever seen that site

 

fuck thats dope i love the red one

 

mse looks kool. needs to have boarder for each letter i think. stand out more.

 

Yo Ras i been looking at alot of Seen's oldshool shit especially alot on the trains and i think i understand what u mean by this.......
Spec..i dont think you needed to do keyboard letters..just do the simples..lean em to one side..push em up..and thats it really..but dont bend the letters..look at sum of SEENS old skool simples on trains..i think thats whut u shud do..
....But do u think u could do a quik sketch of some random letters or somthing just so i understand Thanx man and those 3 new Aimo peices are chillen and i dissagree I deffinitly think you got some skills when it comes to drawing characters Stay up and Thanx

 

okay I'll crit you...edges are too jagged and it does nothing to make your piece look better it just makes it look alot worse. And you have these random bumps that also fuck up the look of the sketch. Does it say "RL" if so, the structure of the "R" looks awkward, but the structure of the "L" isn't too horrible, so keep doing simples I guess...

MSE-likin' the bottom one more but they're both pretty nice, your style is so pointy...haha looks good though.

 

Heh,yeah.. goddamn F's... Come`on someone do some f's for me to bite,I haven't seen too many so it's hard to get ideas :/

 

Its AL which is for Alka.

But okay thank you for the good crit. See by ur last reply to me with the whole "newbie" thing. You cant totally 100% deny what i said wasnt true. A bunch of people just say do simple keyboard letters and dont know anything about what they are saying and just saying it because they see alot of the better artist saying it. Its the easy way to get out of posting pictures and getting crits without giving crits back. Since no one gives crits to whoever doesnt crit people just say . Do simples, thinking its a crit so people will crit there own work.


Anyways thanks again Sume for the good crit, it actually helped. Now i dont know why you couldnt have just posted that in the first place because you and I both know your not a "newbie" and you didnt fall under that catagory.

 

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NEWBY..you get the jist right..they dont exactly slant..but w.e...just look at more and more of Seens eldest train bombs...or look at..Norm..Revs...Cost...they do good blocks..or try Dondi

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Fap..i did an F in my style..you can fine tune it to how you like it..and the bottom extension you can switch to the other side..you can see wut it looks like as i left a hollow line of whut it wud looklike..

hope i helped

 

I'm Sume, he wasn't saying your letters look like mine cause they look nothing like mine, but your name is really close to mine...

 

sleet
im gonna have to do a someone piece
sorry

 

Thanks man Aimo.. Time to go work on mah / your F

 

Have at it.

 

some stickers dont know if this is the right place

 

the 'm' in ur throw needs work...i dont really like it.
but the other shit looks pretty good. keep workin it.

 

dudes, I would like to get some crits on this.
Also, doesn anyone have tips for making throwies?


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G Wahl - make the "l" a little bit more slanted like the rest of the letters, also like above me.. make the "o" hole a little smaller. also add a drop shadow and it will look better

Stem-one the only letter i like at all is the e, i guess the m is ok but its all off center so it throws it off.

Bump because of only like 1 reply and 40 other pictures posted <_< [/b][/quote]
likein the colour