[Broken External Image]:http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0073.jpg improve. yh i kno the R and S are fuckin shit.
really quick pen sketch...had to squash the a and e together cuz the page wasnt big enough [Broken External Image]:http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/7043/djfsjdbf005wy6.jpg crits on the sketch and the HANDY wud be nice
hahah shit i forgot to crit other ppl well code the throw is nice but you could try define your o and d more they look alot alike
[Broken External Image]:http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7357/picture1ni7.png Because everyone ignored it, crits? Edit: Right before I post... Damn... Will do, thanks!
people can we crit flicks first then show later to fuck sake. plz - nice to kno u got the bar thing going but dont waste time on ur fills. just do letters and onli letters. no shadow. 3d or anything else until u fill confident with ur letters. try to do ur keyboard letter first. but u got the good idead of having the letters stucture and the samw lenght apart. now can u crit mine. [Broken External Image]:http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0073.jpg
pretty sky influenced (but alot of ish in this forum is). try to fill in the negative space by tightening up ur letters and using the 3d to fill the gaps. lookin gd tho it got my vote. ** edit on a closer look the bottom of your e's and l are almost exactly the same as the 'c' posted by sky in the new to graf thread
[Broken External Image]:http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3193/scan0010ml9.jpg cant see too well but the darker part is what im kinda leaning toward. trying to keep it simple but twist it a bit :lol: . I know stick to simples but just playing around. Any advise on the E and L and O? and should i keep the extention on the bottom of the D? Shifty that is sweet you should color it in or do back round.
eske- straighten out the left of the b, keep all youur leters the same width, it gets wider as it goes, take a lil more time, so its not so sloppy shame put some fucking color in that man thats good, veks lose all the lil lumps crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/8975/dsc00179yo6.jpg yeah i fucked up coloring the s haha
no man, loose the extensions. dont use any until you get better and the bits on the n to. keep your letters the same size to...and dont do that wavy thing to your l...just cuz your doin simples doesn't mean you shouldn't try some 3d though..
Ehhh, just some fuckaround today... I don't really like it but I wanted something else other than my throw... View attachment 252905 "knews" View attachment 252906 "kne" throw... Still working on it. That one's kinda messed up. I'll do a "knews" throw later.