it's funny how the word "the" can make a comment good or bad...for example

"You're the shit, stay up."
or
"You're shit, stop writing."
...
anyways, sorry for this pointless post. <_<

 

bumpifyy...ill crit something as soon as i get back, godamn you kids post like no tomorrow

 

Yea im likin the MKO throwie very clean...

So im workin with simples

crits please

 

MEGAMAN!!!!!!!! h34r:

nice simples, just work on keeping them the same size.

 

i like it all except for that E... you might wanna consider doing a lower case... if not get rid of those X's and lines on it... and are u from 416/905.. i only ask cause u got the swamz throw in ur signature

 

Sume One thanks for the crit brotha

 

surprisingly, i know exactly what you mean about the amoeba thing.

thanks man.

 

my wrist hurts ...

so [please] gimme gimme some grits! ...

I mean crits ... crits please

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Rank - I'd work on that 'R' most of all ... make the connection on the lower part of the enclosure [if that makes any sense] like the connections on the between the bars on the 'A' and the 'N' ... that might make it a little more appealing

 

ARMAwonR-Pretty nice flow to it but make your letters thicker and more consistent, if ya' catch my drift.

 

any crits on my stuff on the last page?

arma, i agree with sumoe. you have some oddly thin parts that dont feel so well with the rest of it. your shits gettin better though. My real suggestion, the M is a little weird to me. Work that to fit in more.

 

sort of looks like Bawk's style.

 

thanks for your opinions

that came right out of my head brother ...

but if I'm biting ... shiii ... lemme know

[i've never heard of bawk anyways ... show me somethin!]

 

Nah it doesn't look that much like bawk.

Like if you saw a bawk piece then about a month later you saw yours it would remind you of bawk, but if you put them side by side you wouldn't see anything.

He used to pust here a lot, under the name 'tricksforkids'.

 

its dope to me cuz the thickness of letters is still pretty uniform if you look at it. just in different proportions.
i could see this going by on a freight train.just fill it in solid ....then with a neon outline or sumthing.

 

I like it arma, not much i can say about it really...

get your thicknesses right, thats all, for example on one side of ur a its thin and on the other side its full thick. fix that up.


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thanks guys

 

damn thats dope as hell.

 

mmm sekz and arma, both looking real good.

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cant really see it, ink it later i spose

 

ARMA - really like it...the structure is nothing like bawks in my opinion.

emokid - kinda difficult to see....inking please

thought i would try somethign elseish...

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got half way through and the lesson ended

 

Cola : better than your other skecth with the G-C


bump


Guh,I would work more on this if it weren't in marker