[Broken External Image]:http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6784/img0940cn6.jpg still having trouble with the B.
nab- i like the lower case "b" better then when u had the upper stevie- hot style but ur B seems to small crits?
^its fine except* if you are going to shade the right portion of the M then do it to the other three letters, if not its not even at all.
you put 3d on the far right line in the M, but none of the other letters have internal 3d. Makes it look like the M is floating in front of the other letters, but what do i know?
Peek-a-boo*in annoying high kiddie voice*. ^_^ but for real good simples except for the little "M" mishap. If it was even a mistake. B)
NAB, the lowercase B works SO MUCH better with that. Work with it. MEZN, you know what everyone has said so far, you need to establish a lightsource and base the 3D/shadow from that. You get what i mean? That charac is cool, i like how you did the letters BIG. Silly kids lol. Im one of them, but its cool...
ok so ive been looked over twice and ive given crits before so i know its not that....can anyone give me some damn advice Stevie nice throw bro
keep in mind how hard it is to outline with huge deco markers... [Broken External Image]:http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/5261/1001739pe6.jpg crits much appreciated.
sume - maybe tyr fixin up the top part of your S and Es, i would still keep them how you have em but try and make them sharper, more defined . . good stuff as always, your def one of the people on here i like to follow . . .
Sumoe, idk if you're going for constancy or whatever you're doing, but to me it looks like this and the canvas piece are the same thing. the only real difference i see is the placement of "one". You might be doing it on purpose, but id love to see you crank something a little different out. ya know? To me, the 2 just seem too similar.