im bumpin this from a few pages back cuz no one gave me crits. sabe i like the second one better but i think it still needs work, and lose the halo over the a, and if u rly wunna use quotation marks make them fit better, but its a good start [/b][/quote]
The second one isn't really legible, you've got way to much curvey shit and not enough structure imo.

 

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comment please

 

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wat do u think

 

fuckk and i post right under some guy who writes meek2 :angry:

wv new handy fucked up on the ORA... crits?

meek not digging the e's

stale keep working on it... alot

and eske its sick

 

the e's arent bad, i had a meek in my city to

 

hell yeah, otrs blow ass and i love all of my homemade markers.... easiest homemade is a zig woodcraft filled with your ink [/b][/quote]
word...the only name brand marker i'll use is a kyrlon shortcut...shits made for like wood furniture touch ups and shit but it it will last for months and the paint is a nice consistancey and opaqueness. it's only for small street sign/mailbox like tags tho you know.

 

crits??? if you want you can do one for me i cant realy think out of the box on this one some other ideas would be helpfull thanks

 

where u from.
there's a MEEK TKO alrady, dont know if you know that or ont.

 

master what did u use for those red tags, for some reason looks like one of those oil based markers that i have, but anyways there really nice

 

definitely feeling these master. glad you kept to that style. only thing i dont like out of all of them is the "s" in the artcrimes one. definitely dope shit tho.

 

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stop making seperate posts for every pic...you could fit those onto one if you tried. and also post in the right fucking section. this is the toy TAGS section where you post TAGS. you want the toy black book section.

 

ight thanx!

 

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faggot.




seriusly though, thats gay as hell don't copy those.
and do simple block letters, no addons (arrows ect.)

 

Dread Tag
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Critique please, I suck really bad and need to see what i am doing wrong

 

Reak, try speeding shit up. It looks like your takin your sweet ass time tryin to make things flow that just shouldn't. When you tag faster your lines will come out cleaner and you'll get the flow of the word naturally after a while. Practise your alphabets, work with each letter individually, then start just writin dread without tryin to connect everything and shit. Eventually your hand will start doin it for you.