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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. 14nick

    14nick Senior Member

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  2. Noddles912300

    Noddles912300 Senior Member

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    No the bubble letters are not better keep doing the block letters till you get the balance and spacing and thickness etc of your letters down.
    try using a rule and drawing 2 parallel lines and draw the letters in between them.
     
  3. kicklip9634

    kicklip9634 Senior Member

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    and i can tell you didnt take your time with that 1 cuz if u look aqt the r the first bar i shit.. jus keep practicin
     
  4. Creepface

    Creepface Member

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    RADE

    your A looks good along with your E

    try and form that R out of straight Blocks

    i tried to do your name here....it dosent look too good but its a basic idea.

    [Broken External Image]:http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a133/ids86/PHOT0004.jpg


    and do what noodles said!
    use a ruler to get those lines even and whatnots

    why dont you just work on doing one letter at a time until you get that letter down?

    instead of rushing?

    im not beefing im just saying...i know my shit looks toy.
    it will help you in the long run
     
  5. Noddles912300

    Noddles912300 Senior Member

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    its NODDLES! :lol: lol its alright tho :p
    yea most letters in your name are pretty easy the --> R side of the R D and E are pretty much a straight bar so start with that it will make things a bit easier. ill see if i can post one up later.
     
  6. Creepface

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    Sorry Noddles.

    was reading too fast and messed that up!

    thanks for understanding though.

    heres my block letter stuffs i posted a few pages back...im working strictly on these for the time being and trying to avoid those bubbles for a while

    [Broken External Image]:http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a133/ids86/DSCN1399.jpg
    i know its bad...
    [Broken External Image]:http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a133/ids86/DSCN1400.jpg
    the gold paint pen my girlfriend had died on me....it would have looked better without the scrapes of goldish color in the TEK
     
  7. nickstix

    nickstix Senior Member

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    tek...those simples arent exactly that great, try to draw using bars

    bump for crits
     
  8. Creepface

    Creepface Member

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    yeah i know my simps arent the best, but i was just entertaining an idea and thanks for that needed crit!

    im going back to the doodlepad to work on bars for a bit.


    be be in about.....30-40mins?


    idk.


    and i still think that looks nice ^SUME^
     
  9. sank one

    sank one Senior Member

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    talk in pms.. you joined today and you all ready have 17 posts....
     
  10. cess!

    cess! Elite Member

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    Yo this is an improvement, its the best one you posted..keep in this direction, keep doin simple easy stuff
     
  11. Creepface

    Creepface Member

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    Yo this is an improvement, its the best one you posted..keep in this direction, keep doin simple easy stuff [/b][/quote]
    thats not mine thats one i did for RADE

    im TEK
     
  12. cess!

    cess! Elite Member

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    if you drew that, whether your name or not, its an improvement
    if you didnt draw it, then nevermind
     
  13. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    that looks nice!

    and yes the tags look okay! [/b][/quote]
    what the fuck is with people telling other people there shit is nice when it's not...no beef whahappen? but the tags aren't "okay"...I'm not too good at tags but yours aren't too great, work on them, they aren't really really horrible either but just work on them...I like the throwie though, pretty good but I don't like how the whole in the "R" is a dash, thats just me though.

    sorry for this little rant but I'm sick and tired of people saying bad shit is good, it makes people think they are good and it makes them improve less... :)
     
  14. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    @ cess!'s post... haha... he didn't do that one but that is an example of what you should be doing, 14nick.

    nickstix: i don't like how your "S" overlaps itself, and try to play around with the middle part of the "E". the "M" also doesn't quite fit in with the other letters... like it's too flowy or something
     
  15. HuntingLOLs

    HuntingLOLs Senior Member

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    rade, dont come back before you have listened to what you have been told over and over.

    dont post till you have proven you can do letters in bars like shown. come back in a week and show us your best creation
     
  16. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    14nick... this is kinda what you wanna be doing:
    [Broken External Image]:http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/9139/photo0028du7.th.jpg
    see how it's made out of bars? the letters should be the same width and height too, although my A and D are a bit wider than the E and R are.

    and the important thing to take note about when you're using bars...
    [Broken External Image]:http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/6149/photo0029ds4.th.jpg

    see the black pen highlighted in purple? your bars should tend to be the same width (don't pay attention to the middle of the letter, although i made it so the bars have varying widths, you sohuld make the bars the same width, everywhere.

    (my pencil wasn't coming out good so i had to ink stuff in... didn't bother with the text.)
     
  17. sabe2

    sabe2 Senior Member

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    RADE ok you gotta try and make youre letters with shade then u gotta try and bring the tops of them closer together

    PS: i changed my name too SERK2
     
  18. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    uhhhhhhhhhhhh

    bump.


    yarr.




    and nick. don't get ahead of yourself. know that your a toy. know that you won't be considered a "writer" for a while. dedicate yourself. work on basic letter structure (keyboards) every day. long into the night. and don't try anything else. then start fuckin around with bars.

    you're never better than you are.

    im still in the basic structure bin too. it sucks. i wanna be good. but i wanna practice at the same time so i can get there faster.

    hopefully im not just rambling and this actually makes a skoche of sense.
     
  19. fredom-writer

    fredom-writer Senior Member

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  20. Noddles912300

    Noddles912300 Senior Member

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    this was really quick just to show what im talking about to rade i know its sloppy
    [Broken External Image]:http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9075/scan0001du4.jpg
    see how the sharpie part is alined? do it kinda like that. wow we have been trying to help rade this whole time :lol: YAY my scanner is fixed.
    Nem i like the first one better but the 3-D is bit messed up.