i liek the bottom one better so work on makign the top flow more, it flows nicely it just looks kinda wack, all like very msall changes will make it look good, just eachletter needs jsut al ittle bit of reszing and shit
okay heres my last 3 little things i was working on. the first two didnt look so good after i outlined them in ink... so i left the last one naked. im dedicating myself to nothing but 3 weeks of bars. everyday...doing at least 15 TEKs in nothing but that style. so here they are [Broken External Image]:http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a133/ids86/DSCN1410.jpg came out shitty after i did the outlines.....fuck....little karak going there...i might have to play with that idea for a bit. [Broken External Image]:http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a133/ids86/DSCN1409.jpg im proud of this in a way, because im not like trying to be something im not.its simple and still rough...but its a start.... off to work now. later.
freedom - i like the first style better. the second one looks kinda generic in my opinion. thanks noddles. yeah. like i said, i got so fuckin tired of sketching. i almost just posted it half colored and all stupid looking. i should have just done that. but yeah, i know how to lay down 3D and all. when i focus.
People drawing things like this should not be posting on a graffiti forum yet. If ever. Seriously, the only excuse for this is if your like really young or somthing. Like any person i know can draw decent/proportionate block letters. Does anyone agree with me.
Thanks evrey 1 for helpin me i wont post more shit im jus gunna practice with waht u guys told me. and noddles i coudlent see ur pic I saw a red x and it said user posted image. but is this better? [Broken External Image]:http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/4465/blackbook002dz8.jpg and with R should i do left or right? and witch A? [Broken External Image]:http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3040/blackbook001bn9.jpg
No you obviously don't get it, he fuckin' showed you a sketch to copy and yours still came out like shit, and you're only doing simples. why does it "feel weird"?
Draw something out in bars and leave in the lines that should be on the inside of the letter, so we can give you better pointers. Drawing that way is the ONLY way you are going to advance better.
yea i noticed that i was like i seen that 'S' b4? then i was like ooh shit buh i didnt wanna beef so i aint say shit lol [/b][/quote] huh? i haven't seen sume stuff in a while. Well i'll change it if necessary. I wasn't tryin to bite anyone or snything when i was doing sewr pieces.. i was tryin out some stuff because i didn't like how the middle part of the s pointed out. Well back to the drawing boatrd
etch i like the 3rd on love the 3-D on it and uhh Rade ummm gosh im quite speech less and unfortunatly on in the good way. You can do better than that....i hope
etch, your 3d is great, just play with the letetrs for some flow Rade, all i can say is work on your structure, i know R can be a toughie sometimes (for me atleast) "shock" View attachment 256280 crits?
ALright well ur saying bars is THIS what you want? [Broken External Image]:http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/5015/blackbook003do3.jpg ....
soo. my friend just started writing. and i wanted to show him a decent throw, so i thought "hey, i havent tried em in ahwiel, what the hell" so i did one View attachment 256286 and hes still yet to see a decent throw. it says sym, he writes syms. *i am not liable for whoever may go blind from looking at that..
I like it. h34r: edit: by the way I might "borrow" that "s". and Rade the "R" and the "D" still aren't right even with using the bars.
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