Yo freakshow work on that throwup before you go tagging that shit, if they're bubble letters, make them pop like bubble letters. They're too compact. Widen that shit homie. Maybe it's just me. Whatev.
regarding freakshow im pretty happy about the bear, but the throw is a little choppy, and i dont like that portruding spike coming out of the first letter.
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so i never get any crits on my work, ppl always say thats "ill" or some shit like that... can one of the better cats in here give a crit... plz!!
sank-you have a nice simple style, try thowing some extras into it now, additions, addons, a more wildstyle, see where it goes and play with color now. tompenny-the colors are ruining that piece, do you have any simples?
sank- i agree with bigel tompenny- um what dose it say id say simples or post one without color to see what it actually looks like [Broken External Image]:http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/throw.jpg
SANK - lose that thing coming out of the A... otherwise expand like thingy said, addons links etc TOMPENNY - those colours clash man.. maybe try similar colours, chek the colour weel for complimentaries etc. mine... quite simple... crits APPRECIATED [Broken External Image]:http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/9492/zera1jn4.jpg cheers guys
pretty clean for the most part considering your personal skill level... hmmm erase the pencil lines before you color it at least or dont press so damn hard on the pencil.
Zera yours is good because its nice and simple but you should try to make the lines all the same width like on the right leg of the R and the Z. Tompenny the colors on your piece are fine blue and orange are complementary other stuff is wrong about it.
Well in my social experiments of conducting and examining the laws of one being called a " Toy ", there is no true meening to this word. It is just a figment of your simple, non-complex minded cranium. It is impossible for a human being to become a child's playing instrument. Thus, your statment was proven wrong and neglected completly. -The Institute Of Science And Research. DR.Goldstein PS. You're a "nuance"...