feeling that bottom one would make a nice block buster says keeley for a girl i know its gonna go on a canvas [Broken External Image]:http://www.pixilive.com/uploads/20070317/wedding pics 2679046.jpg
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try adding a bit more style to your letters, the h is a bit too wide thats bout it though nice simple edit @chulo
yer it is by far the wildest thing ive ever done but i thought id go all out coz it will be my first canvas i showed her the sketch n she could read it fine she dont write so i cant be that crazy but i dont mid she likes it and can read it so its cool
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chulo - seems ok but needs work def. neza - i like it Xsjadox - i reallly like that. now for me. i havnt posted in a long time cus i have been expiramenting with diff names and styles. please give me crits
shamee i like the bottom, not the top. everyone else on the page, do block letters. cept for neza, who i think should go simpler but certainly not blocks. now mineeee. View attachment 259198 for an english project actualy. oedipus rex. incest. ran out of FUCKIN space for the T. gonna have to tape an extra page. View attachment 259199 peace
BUmp got no crits. [/b][/quote] not great but its a start. id make my pencil lines alot lighter since youll prolly be erasing them after the inking. dig?
View attachment 259208 View attachment 259209 View attachment 259210 View attachment 259211 there are just some throwies i was playin with Alive, im really likeing that Caer Nase, you're on the right track stick with those bars