tricksthe ninja, i like this more than anything ive ever seen by you. i just dont like how hidden the E is. yeah... :wub: [/b][/quote] oh and bump cuz im a whore like that h34r:
her names KELSEY but im too lazy so i do KELC yea heart is gay idk y i made it jkdsfjkfkjg blah i wanna get better already tricks thts shits fire dude only thing i dont like is the second n but i wish i was tht goood jkfdjk
so, I been pissed lately cause I only been writing "SUME" and nothing else... Soooo, Im'a make the entire alphabet, with each individual letter having 3D extensions etc. It gunna be pretty sweet, just thought I'd throw that out there. Prolly gunna start it this weekend.
haha nothin man..landed in some trouble n probably headed to juvi for something i didnt do..but cant talk about it due to legal things..you know who that goes..but w.e. ill take what gets dealt to me man i aint a snitch...hows shit up in canada eh? lol
your lines are really shaky and bumpy, which means you are probably trying too hard to make a throw...just make a simple throw that you can do in a nice flow..
lay off the arrows and shit for a while before you get your main letter structure work on simples and letter structure and then add arrows and shit and dont do that half arrow shit thats really toy and smooth out your lines, work on your hand smoothness and control AND stick with a straight fill until you get everything else better
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i like it alot actually, the letters are solid, but like pesk said you're trying to hard, throwies are supposed to be quick and fast, you dont sketch em, you throw em. anyway, this isnt really blackbook ish, its a big ass sign i stole from my favorite painting spot..just finished it last nite.. crits welcome
popshots i like the bottom one the letters are smooth and flow good and your letter structure is dope now add color and go crazy with it
SUME : im excited to see that alphabet, its gonna be tight im sure of it. BigEL: i really like your stuff, and those gunfaced people are hard as fuck here's my latest thing, only pencil and paper, got no colours left crits at all?
bump. [/b][/quote] im liking this just make the bottom of the a and top of the k more proportioned and the a is wide and take off the bump on the a and you know how you have the k's leg as a circle? try that with the A for awhile and get it to work if it will
bump, more feedback appreciated. shifty -- like that, don't know much anything bout throwies so that's all i can say bigel -- i likes... especially the colors. j-one -- mehh... probably work better as a handstyle. smooth your stuff out. popshots -- in your second pic, really like that "e", would refine it a bit though.
xj-onex looks more like a handstyle been made 3d or smth, not cool in most cases. check the 3d, you can't make a letter that has a fading point 3 dimensional and the same points (check end of the e for example). lets see some simple blockletters