Bigel:that stuff is siiiick

kersr:nice simples,i like the last one best

depro:you''re getting there keep working,now you can add color and 3-d

well,was bored so i coloured a recent pencil sketch:

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im realy no happy with this

heres the pencil sketch:

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i already posted here it before

 

i like em southpole. i like the color u picked 2

 

yo im rele liking the pencil sketch not the first because of all the rd line coming up from the peice

 

yeah thats what im not happy with,i thought it would look good but after i regret what i did

 

This is my poor attempt at trying to piece tell me whats wrong with it plzzz
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My friend asked me to do this on a wall for him so I'm practicing alot, what do you think of my choices: Rusto and Krylon -- NY FAT and NY THIN caps? I'm changing colors to GREEN FILL and LIME GREEN outline..
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fast sketch i did this morning before going to school( i dont like the stuff all around but neway...) Crits plz?

edit: its my first time i tryed to shadowing so thats it

 

bumpity bump bumpersss for critizzles pweeeessssss

 

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theres the skate one blah im not happy with any of those two but whatevskis and hasex go simpler and crit the person above you! h34r:

 

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like this?

 

lars - lose arrows mos def
hazex - pleaser please please go to simples

 

lose arrows on both?

 

Ignore tha stupid shit that says one..
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Advice to make it better? wa wa..

EDIT: Wow.. How can I forget that

Hazex - Stick with simples like the letters on ur keyboard. Keep doin that till you feel like you can move on then get more complex with the add-ons and watt not..

Lars - You def. gotta get rid of the arrows.Your letters are pretty nice on the second pic buh the arrows kills the whole thing..

 

yea lars lose the arrows on both of them. make your letters look like the ones on the keyboard and then widen them and bend them and you should have something decent if you do it right...

react:


crit the one above you and you shall be crticized.
law of the forum

 

depro that much better keep it up and just build off of the

 

recent stuff i did not to great

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critz please

 

i dont rele like th top one to much because of all the bits and things at the top of the letters but the second one looks pretty good id like to see it coloured

 

killin em.

 

beastie if you call that not to good i whant to see your `good`

depro your getting way better than the first post of u i saw keep working!
just done this like now

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crits?

 

the "s" looks wierd