I like it man, just a few things. the E S connection looks a little forced at the bottom and the add-on the E looks off, I'd thicken up the arrow on the K to match the N if your going to keep it. and work on your shines. Real clean and nice shadowing...you get better every time.

 

Best yet Nesk! Love the filll and highlights!

 

envoys not bad

 

yup nesk that good stuff . . . i like how the letters are more compact and snug together then your other stuff where the letters seems too thin and long (alot of open space inbetween)

 

yo skeam, y did u post that on the toy forum????? its really good

 

because he is a toy .. the letters i don't like, they need some work but the painting is nice

 

nesk that shits really clean, but i think the letter structures sucks. id say put some more time into gettin some better letters. dont mean to sound like a dick, but my 2 cents.

 

the nesk and the refuser shit is sick

 

beautiful peice, but i'd go back with a can of white and give it some highlight

haha cool little TFH above it too :lol: just realised

 

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disgusting peice i did a while back

 

cheers for all the comments guys.

yeh that tfh tag is old school but theres 2 dope peices on there from ques at the moment, i posted up the fish already and this one he did on sunday...

"just a quick peice..." wish my quick peices lookd like that lol

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u guys toss that phrase around 2 much, im not tryn 2 stat shit but i doubt that ur much "better" than nesk...im certainly not

and ive tagged w/ toys, like REAL toys, guys who cant even do an outline...so mayb my concept of a toy is much differant than the more experienced writers

 

did I say I was better than him? NO thats why I post in here too, if you don't understand the definition of toy its not my problem, he is more advanced toy than others thats all, and that piece isn't so great, the letters are really bad, he can just paint clean

 

would you mind telling me why they are bad? what ive done wrong? most of the people ive spoken to around my area dont think my letters are really all that bad...?

Im not gettin all cutup about it or defending myself or woteva, just wouldnt mind hearin an opinion on how i could make my letters better, coz quite frankly i couldnt be fucked posting sketches in the toys blackbook thread and im not good enuff to post sketches in the big boys so yer.

cheers

 

I didn't mean to say they're really bad, they're just not really good. They need some work, I don't like the way they connect, I hate the way the S swirls up, basically the structure just doesn't look very appealing. I don't know how to explain it, when I look at them I think toy, that's why I said that because someone asked why you should be posting in here. I don't know, where I come from there is A LOT of really nice graffiti and I'm sure everyone around here would say they look toy. It's not a bad thing you just need to work on them more, and it's only MY opinion and honestly they're probably better than my letters. Just keep working at it and soon enough no one can say they look toy, you're probably better than mostly everyone who posts in here anyways.

 

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Some shit on wood:

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Clean.. i like the letters, but add some dropshadow
and spraypaint on wood looks fucked up

 

I like someone's O's...

 

yeh cheers mate, like i said not defending myself, no beef intended. Its good hearing everyones opinions weather they are good or bad.

peice from yesterday some of the lines are a bit "how ya goin" and i fuct up the 3d with them 2 big black dirty lines comein out at the bottom. but i gave some highlights ago and i think it looks alot better with them, i mght start doing them more often.

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and heres one from today, hell random simple blockbuster style thing i like it though real bright n shit... just tryin to mix it up a bit.

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