well. bottom one. grid ride of the extra lines... looks CHEEESSSEEYYY take them away den it would look betta.
Freedon-That throw is pretty nice Here a lil somethin of mine please crit! [Broken External Image]:http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/wuze1.jpg
murder jsut make ur w less big and make the u a lil higher i find my first sketch ugly but still posting [Broken External Image]:http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/2743/uglyrehealfl0.png And this one i dunno lol like blocks lol and sry for the pic its inclined [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4909/corkedvc7.png
dope. . . . except for the S. that shits wack sorry. shoulda used ur s from the bella is a beast sketch. n the crossbar on the T is a bit 2 thick.
bouncing, im feelin ya style [Broken External Image]:http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/chase222.jpg
BUMP for crits cus i didnt even get one... fuckin selfish people chase you need to keep it proportional... the size of letters is all over the place bouncing soul your style is awesome rheal stay simple.
i dont like the l or s but overall good, working on letters: and yes it is a bit like mewts style, even i noticed that [Broken External Image]:http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5599.jpg
yea it looks like mewt's stuff but a lot worse, a lot worse...but if you didn't say that I probably wouldn't have noticed, were you lookin' at his shit while drawing? It's okay if you did, I look at other people's shit when I'm sketchin' too, still don't like your letters, but I don't think I ever will, just personal preference.
peg it looks better with the detail on the 3-d, your style would be so sick if the letters were more pronounced. throwies niggazzz.. hayz. waster12 buffer easoe. rakos.
peg it looks better with the detail on the 3-d, your style would be so sick if the letters were more pronounced. throwies niggazzz.. hayz. waster12 buffer easoe. rakos.