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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. KAL

    KAL Senior Member

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  2. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    kal man youve got to give crits to get crits, dont just expect to get them, thats maybe why people dont crit you
     
  3. Robbie P

    Robbie P Senior Member

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    Nice characters Remo.

    KAL try to make your A share the same style as the other letters.

    Mine is pretty shit, exchanged with a local.

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  4. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    robbie p the only thing i would change on that peice is some of the sharp angles on the letters like square them off more [Broken External Image]:http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/6605/img0101ff7.jpg
    i think im going to change the outline make it a darker so it is easier to see the letters crits please
     
  5. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    dim i like that but the E is waay tooo big, maybe even if you just completely filled in the letters you would be able to make them out way better
     
  6. SUM

    SUM Member

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    crits? [/b][/quote]
    i think you are missing a shadow on the L. not positive though. on the top one. check that out.
     
  7. KAL

    KAL Senior Member

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    i do give crits, i just didnt on that post.

    dim- i like it, but i think the N should be a little thinner... just a little
     
  8. KAL

    KAL Senior Member

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    sum- do u mean on the backside of the L? cus if so ur right i just realized that on a second look.
     
  9. Murder817Worth

    Murder817Worth Senior Member

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  10. KAL

    KAL Senior Member

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    keep doing what ur doing just erase the lines inside the letters, and practice shadows and 3d.
     
  11. glassarm

    glassarm Member

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    murder - I'd beef that "u" up a little, make it just as strong as the rest of the letters. Other than that, looks pretty good. Might also want to check the position of the middle "prong" of the "E". It seems a tad low to me, but idk what you were going for. Keep it up!
     
  12. Mints

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    Robbie - looking sweet, not liking the bit on the up top left corner of the 'P' and use a ruler on them 3d lines and it will look super dope.
    Murder - keep at it, not liking the 'U' looks to wimpy and kinda undercase where all ur others are caps and just looks outta place
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    yeah so here bash away, isnt great drew it up while i was taking a shit


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  13. -Sinn-

    -Sinn- Senior Member

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    Mints - That looks like a retard with epilepsy pissed and shit on a piece of paper (nah Just Kidding Homie pretty good ur gettin there)

    G.W.U 4LIFE NIUKKA
     
  14. dibz

    dibz Senior Member

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    could u please tell me where you got those templates, i have a feeling that question gets asked alot but fact remains i still have no idea
     
  15. "KASPER"

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  16. BIGel

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    that top one needs work but i love the fact that you're even attempting that daim style. the fill looks good, the structure needs a little more thought to it.

    for pills
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  17. NiL

    NiL Elite Member

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    Thats looking nice BigEL
    I can see some nice style there kasper looking good
    Mints keep working on the simples man you're doing good keep it up.

    Can I have some crits on these tags? I don't like the 'N' on the 2nd pic and I got some other pics too post 'em up later I'm going for the small to big look now.

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  18. AbYSS~>

    AbYSS~> Senior Member

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    It was really hard for me to go simple and not use pencil im totally new to this non sketching just marker thing but here is what i got. Help Please!
    Went for like the ballon bubble lettering i saw some isbk guys (phoenix tag crew) write somthin like that near my house so i addapted to it and tryed somthing. i know the charecter is horrible but i drew it in the car and i hit a bump and put a huge line there soi had to turn it into something.
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    P.S. the words under neath it say "fools names and fools faces always show up in public faces" ahah heard it from my friend who got caught taggin by our principle and the principle told him that. thought it was ill so yeah.
     
  19. TESTER

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    abyss not a bad tag, a lot better then your throw start off my using black and white, dont do those dark blue lines in your letters, the top of your b and your u are pushed to far to the left, try finding pre formed letters and just do the outlines and then over lap them,



    ps never do that charac again even though you "had to"
     
  20. Stim

    Stim Senior Member

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    you're so awesome man.