since the nes piece was declared bad, I decided not to try and fix anything and just give it some color, this is how it came out hah.
alright, well you can atleast give me some pointers. anything else? NES- i like that with the exception of the dots on the fill
Guys said to keep going simpler and work with solid colors so.. heres a piece i did with my new and for sure tag name... disas. made my own style of letters again.. [Broken External Image]:http://aycu17.webshots.com/image/14376/2005673126870845846_rs.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://aycu37.webshots.com/image/13636/2005656370462808871_rs.jpg Feedback. did it fast but yeah. thought it was sick. bubbles arent perfect but.. critz please.
Stay simple. Yeah, That could be the best advice. Concentrate more on your structure before adding any extra curves. Try to keep the letters the same height for now and your 3d needs alot of work.
Abyss: goin simple goes for you too. round off some of those edges, they are too pointy. i wouldnt get too caught up in color, just letters and consistency. Striker: the blobs on the ends of the letters dont look very good. just keep the letters nice and straight, but distort them a little, maybe by bending one or to of the legs. same to you about color; its not particularly (sp?) important, so i wouldnt get too attached for now. nes: i sorta fell the 'e' and the 's', but the n doesnt flow that well the random extensions arent the best looking either sum: lose all that shit around you latters. make them visible. ninja out. h34r:
Dude it looks like you got the basic structure down( c, m, a) , the r's a bit iffy tho. Try and toss some style into the letters before linking them all ridiculous like. Keep it simple but stylish man. The bottom of the r is a prime example of such rebelliousness. Keep doing all ur letters till they are as clean as the m and a, even better
So yeah haven't been around in a while used to write suki but was stuck with the U and I so i now write STD. Then and now. [Broken External Image]:http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7310/suki21tf9.png [Broken External Image]:http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/5793/stdhe3.jpg trying to work on letter structure left out colors / 3d good? crits?
some charcter is from today. [Broken External Image]:http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/624/scan0003gf0.jpg my scanner's a peice of shit and it cut off some of the bottom character. whatever. crit em all the same.
bumpity bump goes the night. chase if u actually want to get good, ignore those 2, theyre just dazzled by all the lines. "oooooooooooo, wildstyle!" EXTENSIONS HAVE TO COME FROM SOMEWHERE. yes u do have letters, but then u have so much useless bullshit from nowhere that it covers them up. lose all it, focus on shaping the letters themselves.