this is that bullshit

 

what is wrong with it then??

 

i think it's good but has a ceazer element to it.

 

having thick line on the outside and thin line on the inside is graphic desgin technique

 

nothing wrong with casa shyt i was just thinking out loud

 

i would start with adding tabs and lil effects to your letters before going with full on extensions/addons . . . and i dont think of addons as a part of the letter structure, probaly the opposite, i do teh letter then look to see where an addon would help reinforce flow of letters or eat up some unwanted space . . .

good stuff there caza

 

sky since on can you plz crit my stuff because noone else will so i rather have one experience person tell me wats wrong wit it rather then 3 or 4 toyish ppl tell me no beef its just everytime i post something i never get crit even wen i give it

 

damn man i love the way you do your fills and colors

alright im finally gonna post some old sketches..critz?
valentines day sketch...
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took some of that miami deco style....(middle one is a stencil)
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some more stickers...
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latest sketch that i finished...
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ESKE!
go practice some blocks....your letter proportions are whack imo.

go look in a magazine and pick out your letters....take those letters and copy em in your black book. get some solid letter structure

 

smartsoft thanks for the crits but im sry this is the simpliest im going
thanks anyway

 

casa-realy sick,im liking it
skesh-don't try full add ons yet,when you think/feel an add-on could be usefull somewhere

ughh some finished product

i hate colouring lol

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finished

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well,critS?

edit:hush that shit is tight imo

 

south-pole its good simple but a bit unproportionate? and lose the arrows
hush- not bad but not digging the bottom one
anywaysheres some stuff that i did inked the MEKRAZE sketch and the first e turned out trash



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**edit the 2page one looks weird because of the fact its on 2pages and makes it look crooked**

 

lookin kl bit chunky for my liking but yh it kl but u missed some 3d

 

i ment southpole btw

 

dude you want critz....but then you wont listen to them

your lines are bad...you cant even color inside the lines
letter structure is bad! you need to do some blocks

ill make a deal with you....if you can draw some blocks without having to use a ruler and make straight lines then you are right and i am wrong.

but i would bet money that you cant. dont take this the wrong way but the stuff u posted is whack...go do blocks and learn your letters

 

na i think he needs to keep learn his stucture. he getting there now just need to keep practicing on it. he will get there. before doin adons. and u gain some flow. dont make ur later straight like a ruler.

 

it looks like your trying to force a style that isnt you
it looks like your trying too hard for the whole "weird" but hot style with faces and wack extensions that turn out hot

but that whole trying shit isnt working.
this looks to forced and i dont really like it

but hey, thats just me.

 

thanks shame for taking my side I'm pretty sure the first on I did was simple and the second one I was messing around

blocks are you serious I don't need to prove anything thing to you

 

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smartsoft is right in that your hand looks hoobly, but why is that? . . . maybe your sketching to big so you have to make these long pen strokes that are hard to keep clean and unwoobly or youre not relaxing and holding the pen gently allowing you to smoovely move the tip across the paper . . .try drawing smaller so your lines will be shorter and you can control it more . .

as for letter structure i would take out the odd looking lil things you added to the letters and just practice getting th ebasic letter down now . . . . but i dont think doing blocks will help, just keep rocking simples (like your letters are) and used and comfortable with the tools of the trade . . .dont listen to haters but know your place, quietly get better then flip the script on them mother fuckers

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morning doodle, changed the arrow addon next to the left of the E