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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. NewbyTJ

    NewbyTJ Senior Member

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    Loose the small extensions like the types like the one on ur bottom left leg of ur R
    other than that decent shit ahha sharpie and marker dats jokes stay up:p
     
  2. whynot?

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  3. -GEKS-

    -GEKS- Elite Member

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    i like it all cept the i, it jst doesnt seem to fit witht eh rest of the letters
    and the s's, mayb add the bottom section, i thoght they were c's
    pretty ill tho
     
  4. whynot?

    whynot? Senior Member

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    thanx but there is no i it sais saep
     
  5. nickstix

    nickstix Senior Member

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    whynot...theres too much going on it makes it really hard to find the letters in some spots, tone it down a little and work on simples.

    bump for crits...
     
  6. -GEKS-

    -GEKS- Elite Member

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    lol my bad i was crittin somethin 2 pages back, i thoght i was on the last page, bt i wasnt


    i woold reccoment goin back to simples and blocks, all the arrows and going throght each letter and crap is not necessary, it will come wiht time
     
  7. 14nick

    14nick Senior Member

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  8. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    yo dont color your stuff yet try to focus on your letters :)
     
  9. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    bri make the i smalller, try to keep it cleaner, youll get it eventually

    that ret is deece, the e seems to big on thew bottom, nice t and r tho

    heres a quick messy pic so its not flickless crits?
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  10. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    aw dude when i first came here i loved evex's stuff
    haha i distinctly remeber a rape girls simple on his homework
    seyar the bottom left of the r is too sharp looking good though
     
  11. eMJayBee

    eMJayBee Senior Member

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    nickstix- The extension on the bottom right of the "t" looks a little outta place, nice 3-d
    14nick- take your time, good so far
    rayseone- looks good, the 'e' is sorta weird lookin, the little sharp part on the 'r' looks outta place.

    Critz?

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  12. TRIZO

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  13. NewbyTJ

    NewbyTJ Senior Member

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    Sayer omfg yessssss dopeeeeeeee and JAyBeeee bottom one looks so dope take a better pic guyyy
    Sayer- Dope shit just loose the lil add on A bottom right an y Top right and itd be dope stay uppppppppp:D
     
  14. Jroc1993

    Jroc1993 Elite Member

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    dude i just shit myself! why u still posting here?
     
  15. ESKE one

    ESKE one Senior Member

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    wow im such a dumbass i really messed up my address

    its [email protected]

    ADD ME!!!!!!

    nicksticks, rayseone, pesk, and emjaybee shyts dope

    everyone else if your simple stay there if not get there
     
  16. Deadpoolzer0

    Deadpoolzer0 Senior Member

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    Some pen shit without extensions and straight up edge blocks...keeping it simple...Or at least....less complicated..
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  17. Sluts_r_us

    Sluts_r_us Elite Member

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  18. Wutchoogonnadoo?

    Wutchoogonnadoo? Banned

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    Pesk...man...i aint liking this as much as your other stuff...like...the 3d is everywhere...and sum of the extensions are iffy...i loved your other peices...how old are you ?

    argh new page...bump de bump in meeeh trunk ( bone thugs n harmony .. such a good song )

    SUPERDUPER BUMP

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    i like this style...and sum of the dope heads in here do too...and im sticking with it...if i think your shitter than me...i wont take notice at the bitching...but if i think your better than me...i will take the stuff you say into account...its wat alot of people on here do isnt it ?
     
  19. levans

    levans Senior Member

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    amkah:its alot better than ur old tyle il give you that but..i dunno i guess i jut dont like the long and short legs...i see wat u were trying to do with the letters but it cuts of because of the odd spot between the k and a..

    il try post some stuff in an hour or so
     
  20. Wutchoogonnadoo?

    Wutchoogonnadoo? Banned

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    the K has a short leg....its like...the dark pink part of the K...is like...a attachment..lol....as it looks like its been attached onto the K....and if you look to the left of the bar...you can see the short leg..maybe i shud define it more...thanks anyways...thats a good point !