your structure is nauseating. use bars and take off all the arrows and extensions. yay i used a big word!! my english teacher would be so proud!!
Aaha..shitttt...that beef was as funny as mine and Casa's...oh and by the way...noticed how Casa hasnt been on for like..2 days...ahaha..fucking 100% certified WANKER !!!.. Carnt we all just get alloooong EDITTTTT * ... What...the... fuck .....has ......happend....... to...... people.... giving...... crits...i wish i was a mod...so then i could ban FATALE ONERSXS aha..shit..you need to tone it down somewhat OM MY GOD FATAL DEATH...daaaamn... ... EDITTTTT * Whapeeenn...ZOMGZZZ MYGODZZZZOOOOOOHNOOEEZ ... you actually eeeeverzzzz ZOMGS gunna ......put one of those babies up ? ... there like..tigres in a zoo...waiting to get out...but like...yours are throwies stuck on paper...waiting to break free...and burst upon a new brick cemented wall...so please...grace your throwies upon the walls of LOOOOVE !! Eske...shittty..uugh..i dont know...you have baarsss...but just dont bend them yet..and dont add like..little under bars...what ever Dropsome..what the fuuuuuuck...nice colours...toooooo crazay...like...krazzie ammo...like..crazy golf...damn...point out the letters...but still...crazy fill...crazy like alive ahah..fuck Alive Still.Alive Not.Dieing.Alive AHAHA...that made me chuckle !!!111
Fatel, you need to get a simple structure going. [Broken External Image]:http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/500000007d13753/1/15/lHJc1Vzd1z-hq2Np3E17PA9AO1KAciLW.jpg All the pens were running out <_< :lol: .
mainevent...your headed in the right direction but try not making all the corners so sharp, also take out the extensions on the bottom right of the 'e' , the top right of the 'e' , the bottom left and right of the 'r' , and the top right of the 's' for now. dont try adding on untill you have mastered simples. nase 7...nice simples, but not all your 3d is pointing in the same direction. like if you look at the left side ofthe 'k' you can see it. xfatel...simples, simples, simples eskeone...take all those extra addons out, they dont fit in the piece. otherwise your letter strucure is pretty decent, keep sketching. now for my stuff... View attachment 271599 ^ bumping this for more crits, it says 'RET' View attachment 271600 ^ for the 'KAY 10' sketch battle crits?
^that kay is soooooooo much better then the ret. it actully looks like it might have been done by two different people, one 6 mos. ahead of the other main event -thats alright, but your s is out of whack, the good thing is, the width of everything seems to be alright.. fatel- practice your pencilling before you color eske- the extensions on your s and k are pointless, but on the y it actully looks good. keep in mind you dont necessarily have to put extensions in the same spot to make all the letters go together.. whahappen-those throws are sick, maybe try playing with the sizes and stuff, it seems like you have the basic throw down pat dropsom3-your coloring is pretty nice, i love crazy color schemes like that, but im not even sure what the blue/brown blob is supposed to be.. baze its alright, but crayola purple/red dont go together good..
haha i saw this user pop up under recent posts and was like no fucking way... haha what happened? [/b][/quote] wordd. well msfyt talked some trash abt my MELT sketch in the adv battle, so i called her a bitch. so then we argued that out, and came back to terms i think, but cezr came in, and only saw the first part, (me calling her a bitch) and suspended me for 3 days. but i argued with him, and i think weve come to some unspoken agreement where this accnt stays but the other i have to wait for 3 days. anyway. my boy SECA just came on here, "Randal the Vandal" just so u know. kay, ret, nickstix, w/e, the bottom one is much better, reminds me a little bit of early tricks_for_kids.
siiick got some touchtwins for my birthday yesterday work pretty nice never tried filling shit before but i will now haha
whao..im entering this Kay 10 battle.. :lol: ... ought to be a laugh Wolf..its okay i spose Nic6...shit man...you getting BUUURTEEERR !! keep it UUUUUUUP LIKE ZAAAH SHYYYY SHYYY SKY THAT IS BLUUEEEE
CUZ IM HAPPPPPPYYYYYYYYY IN WHAT WAY DO THEY MAKE YOUR HEAD HURT.... oochieeeee...i have a throwie...but i scnrt find sumthing gguhh...as you can see...my throwies anrt my strength..aha..i basically used the same bar structure i normally used.. View attachment 271614 Crits.. oh..iv given out my fair amount of crits today
like i dont know i cant even read your post anymore because its filled with a bunch of periods and ugh whao ahhh and other different sound affects and lonng words like burrrrrtttteeeerrr lol its kool though thats your style son b reall B
haha^i agree with that,ras i can't even read your posts anymore i don't know if its realy a throwie but its ok except for the k
amkah - like the m and A not the k good to see u trying throwies tho. sole- just keep workin it will come, try and get rid of the negative space between the L and E tho pen freestyle crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/2092/dsc00262ye2.jpg