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fuck i screwd up my s lol

 

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backyard bombing???

 

Sweet rollup piece cept it woulda been better somewhere else..

 

bumb for new page and crits.
MYND post all pics in same post.. and not feeli the balck and blue one. other 2 are ok i guese.. keep sketchen

 

b;ack 1 wasnt mione n yeah il post all at once,,,,thnxx fer dat crit

 

havent posted up here in a while, been on puregraffiti so here yas fucking go.

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peace

 

Nice fill!
This is a illegal spot, isnt it? You used to do only legal walls
i like it, but the outlines and shines look a little shaky sometimes

edit; i think its just the wood that makes it look shaky

 

very nice nesk.. good control nice fill.. good letters just not feeling a few of the extensions

 

yeh one of the fences at a legal wall not sure if its legal or not but no one really gives a shit, i dont do JUSt legals, just the whole aprent thing makes it hard for illegals yeh long storey, ive done tracksides and roadsides before. cheers for the comments mate.

edit: thanx trashhh, im only just startin to experiance with extensions so i think they might look a bit "how ya goin" for a while till i get a bit more experiance wit em lol.

 

nesk is bringing the freshness, love your shit man.

 

ooh..my firs peice...i think its okay...i was having soo much fun freestyling the out line..i got carried away and did a huge tumor the A..ahaha...and i think my main weakness was keeping the can the same distance from the wall at all times..nyways

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i had to squeeze the K on too..i took the whole wall up..uugh

 

amk been waiting all day to see how'd it go ya - im too ashamed to put up my pieces
anyway, did you do aura before outline? best way to go around the aura is to use either a fat cap and do it like outline, then cut back with outline, or do faaat outline and cut it back with aura, the experienced writers probs got some better ideas i bet

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oh yeah, a shame you didnt put drop shadow or 3d on it would have made it look better

 

chers for the shout! Nice for your first thing fo sho.. keep workin on it and youl b on yer wayy

 

in my town...this is how beef starts..[/b][/quote]
EXACTLY!

NEMR, I'm gonna give you a few tips, since you're new to graff.

-If you have the balls (or audacity) to go over someone else's work, make sure it burns the fuck out of the original art on the wall. Here, I think you failed. There seems to be some dope shit underneath that, and I'm sure a lot of writers are upset that you went over their work with a tiny, lime-green roller. Also, if you're gonna go over someone, it's probably not wise to give shout-outs to your crew and your friends. Now you're bringing beef to your friends, and the writers you went over are gonna start coming up to your friends, looking for you.

-Secondly, OUTLINES, OUTLINES, OUTLINES. I don't know why so many toys think they can get up with a one-color fill-in.

-Thirdly, start slow. Start tagging, start bombing. Don't worry about rollers. Those come later.

 

bump cuz its ah first

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Nesk..so amazing

 

RAS, my advice, plain and simple: just work on letter structure. Start with simple letters and work your way up. Also, work on your can control. See the splotches on the corners? Work on keeping your movements smooth and fluid. That will come with time, but it never hurts to start working on can-control early.

 

thanks thank thanks foe...i gots the wrong caps too .. hah...i will go with sumthing more straigt edges next time......

 

hahha well i gues my shit is toy.. started 6 months ago..and i wanna know what you guys think about my shit so far...the green outline is fixed...but then i don't have a finished picture..but this is pretty much how it looks like..

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let me know what you guys think about this..i posted this in the other piece thread and got dissed and no advice so lemme know what you think

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oh yeah here's another one...just a throw up tho