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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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    Bravo man, I liked this alot



    I'm tired of materialism and obsession over fame
    Your vanity and ego are the trophies you claim
    Get your head out of the clouds and look to the ground
    It's going to take a thousand pound weight to pull you back down
    Rip off your labels, and your abercrombie fads
    Not everything in the world is about being rich, young lad
    Ignorance is not a prize and should not be treated as one
    With tunnel vision like yours you deserve the gun
    But I'm not going to sit around and babble about what I hate
    But look at yourself and take off that stupid bape.
     
  2. cancer patients and crack pipes

    cancer patients and crack pipes Member

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  3. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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  4. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    Bravo man, I liked this alot



    I'm tired of materialism and obsession over fame
    Your vanity and ego are the trophies you claim
    Get your head out of the clouds and look to the ground
    It's going to take a thousand pound weight to pull you back down
    Rip off your labels, and your abercrombie fads
    Not everything in the world is about being rich, young lad
    Ignorance is not a prize and should not be treated as one
    With tunnel vision like yours you deserve the gun
    But I'm not going to sit around and babble about what I hate
    But look at yourself and take off that stupid bape. [/b][/quote]
    You win
     
  5. cancer patients and crack pipes

    cancer patients and crack pipes Member

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    a little something to describe my emotions right now.

    what was lost is lost, so why should i bother to look.
    because i've traveled this far upstream, just to drown in a brook.
    is it really that hard for you to see what i've tried to complete.
    why should i even bother trying when you've already accepted defeat.
    your deciet, is too much for me to bare or even to swallow.
    and this game can only work if the leader is followed.
    why should i continue to try if you just continue to leave.
    Why should i sit and hold my breath while you forget that i needed to breath.
    so instead i exhale an overwhelming breathe that releaves.
    all of your selfish expectations that i've tried to exceed.
    i realize now how foolish it was to think this ever could last.
    so i ask you now, should i look to the future or dwell on our past?
     
  6. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    I like that, only problem is you spelled "bear" wrong hah

    And some of the lines are a stretch, flow-wise but it's good.

    What's this about? Relationship? Your mentor/big brother/something similar commit suicide?
     
  7. cancer patients and crack pipes

    cancer patients and crack pipes Member

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    sorry bout the typo...but ya it's hard to get the proper flow of a song over the internet because you cant read it the same way as the person who wrote it. and garenteed the flow you imagined when you read it is different from the flow that i intended. that's why i dont like rhyming on the internet...

    and it has to do with a relationship.
     
  8. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    Ahh word
     
  9. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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    You win [/b][/quote]
    Hah, call it a tie :lol:
     
  10. swich

    swich Elite Member

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    throwed than a bitch sliden down on smooth butter/
    ima stay gutter dont play with mean muggers/
    candy frame shutter putin shame to them sukas/
    stupid motha fukas get the rage, kill ya brotha/
    livin vivid picture my vision/
    windows is tinted like a boy scout convintion/
    cady paint drippin cookin chickens in ma kitchen/
    movin big keys across different divisions/
     
  11. jvillebboy

    jvillebboy Senior Member

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    yo, who here actually record shit? lol. im curious. mad dudes can write, but not mad dudes can flow. you know? anyways. ima drop a lil shit again


    i aint ever had beef wit no one on this site
    so chill, half yall round here know how ta write
    and im bein real, its chill you drop a hot verse
    and get a quick battle, see who get knocked first
    while some dudes got work, out hustlin shit
    hustlin bricks, and some aint even accustomed to it
    im touchin the tip, i aint even tryna spark a fuse
    if its hip hop then i think its about the truth...
     
  12. swich

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  13. 2KoS

    2KoS Senior Member

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    It's like the community dregs vs the FEDS,
    Rebellious till I DIE, fist HIGH for the non-uniform HEADS.
     
  14. swich

    swich Elite Member

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    ignite my flow like a flame/
    swang candy frame in ya lane drippin paint/
    for the fame flip the change/
    these dames is all lame/
    my gun goes bang put bitches to shame/
    so speak my name swich one the winner/
    numbah one contender life sinner/
    i bring the heat in the winter and keep a chilled mouth/
    talkin shit well chill out or blodd will spill out....
     
  15. ..:------>SIC<------:..

    ..:------>SIC<------:.. Member

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    I'll rip you up worse than a virgins Vagina,
    and have you watching your back so much youd swear someone was lurkin behind ya,
    I'll bag you kidnap and cut up your nerves and ya spine up,
    beat you to death, cut off your flesh and burn you with fiyah (fire)

    we all die sooner or later, but yours is just a day a way,
    stab you with thousands of rusty metal razor blades,
    cut your eyelids off so you cant stop seeing the pain ya gain,
    from watching me putting a kinfe on your stomach and start to engrave my name,
     
  16. bluntsthatarefat

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    that virgins vagina line was dope
    :p
     
  17. bobo9827

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    cruisin the streets in my six four'
     
  18. japan

    japan New Member

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    word word word word word word ^^^^^^^^^^
     
  19. Dream Creation

    Dream Creation Senior Member

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    stuck in the back of a dodgem viper
    never know wen im gunna have to strike ya
    dint u realise im a class a sniper
    like a credit card bitch i'll swipe ya

    flow double s is the name of my team
    we be flow double s reppin a rude buy lean
    from 15 to 16 my bars have gone from super to being extreme
    bitch ass toy wiggas seem over keen!
    we be showin there mum the true man cream
     
  20. Dream Creation

    Dream Creation Senior Member

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    stuck in the back of a dodgem viper
    never know wen im gunna have to strike ya
    dint u realise im a class a sniper
    like a credit card bitch i'll swipe ya

    flow double s is the name of my team
    we be flow double s reppin a rude buy lean
    from 15 to 16 my bars have gone from super to being extreme
    bitch ass toy wiggas seem over keen!
    we be showin there mum the true man cream