something i freestyled that i wanna work on and try to develop couldnt think how to do a regular O and E so i just did a KVR
Yeah, the structure is fine, The only thing is the L can look like a W but its a whack W so who would expect that from sume? R reminded me of Sky, not sayin bite or nothing just thought I'd throw it in....I like the K, dosn't look like a M too me. Sex, bro I'm liking that new style, I see why it would be difficult to do an O, but it should look fly if you get it tweaked. Urge man, do the white outline in the 3-d like you did on the mouth...and maybe do the teeth coming out more in your face like give it some depth and I think it will look good.
i've entered a few of the character battles. thaa hellhound was mine, tha rat with the cat was, and i forgot any other i did. but i liked them meself. and yeahh, the red splatter was supposed to be bloody explosions. edit:: posting so late to an old post. ha. but whateverr.
the structure is pretty bad Sume...i fort you would of known...this is how i see it.. View attachment 280009 dont think im getting at you even tho you wont cuz your kool...but im justu pointing out sum strucutre mistakes...which you could change immediatly
you are missing the most important part of the "K" I dunno, I still don't really see any problems with the structure, w.e.
Guys...sumes piece says 'LERK'. i dont know how you dont see that,its pretty obveous the last letter isnt an m because it has the bar going out the top making it a 'k'. and the first letter is an 'l' because if it were a 'w' the middle would be up alot more than that. i think its really good sume i read it right away.
View attachment 280015 A simple as everyone requested. Oh wait that's too big,I'll resize it.Stupid thing won't resize it,oh well try and look at it from this size as best you can.
i this Sume's is fine. and that slime peice is orgasmic. shame, only thing i can really make out is the W. dont make the D so far into the R, dont make the top of the a a star, your k looks like a messed up r (drak) heres some stuff i did early morning. im trying to work with this style