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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. amk

    amk Elite Member

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  2. heav

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    yea wat the others sed bout keepin bars same size not missin out lett0rs ;) also sum of the bars dont rly match up like on the right side of the R where the bend is the bars sorta get a bit mangled if u get meh
    BUT lovin da handies especially dat bs one at da bottom, maybe hav letters closer together in sum areas and make the tag extensions flow a bit more from the actual letters etc
    work on ur tag bra!

    EDIT: also da tag extension on da science unbalances it so kill unless u gna hav one before the B...
    simples are deffo good but imo this is errr too simple? u stayin with the only square letters fo too long now keep it simple but bend letters add tiny little entensiony type things form letters in different ways etc
    keep it up
     
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  3. Aces One

    Aces One Senior Member

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    haha, yea ok. forget that letter.
    that proceed piece i dont like too much. love the handstyle and the crown though. did he win the battle?
     
  4. EsKoNeR!!

    EsKoNeR!! Elite Member

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    ai61.photobucket.com_albums_h58_Eskoner_Slime2.jpg

    ESK. goddamn thats an incredible fill. prisma's or copics may i ask? and the letters are real nice as well, i gotta love that S with those curves. haha.[/quote]


    the 3d is copic with a tria belnder. and the blue is copic with tria blender, and orange is copic with tria blender. yellow inline(dunno if you can see) is prisma, and so is that dull yellow solid fill. littledetail lines are also copic with tria blender.
     
  5. Bomber444

    Bomber444 Senior Member

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  6. bloodlandmoney

    bloodlandmoney Senior Member

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    does any one know any details on the proceed battle...

    ^^^wow looks like the bottom one got gizzed on, keep your letters less fat like the bulge on the s and the wierd bottom to the p
     
  7. heav

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    nice letter structure i tink the drips r a bit ova da top but wateva
    also the colours u use always make me feel sick lol
    keep experimenting wit different styles. its gd to find a style and stick with it but it takes time to find that style and develop it, and anyway its gd to write different styles.. givs u a sorta repetoire from which to develop ur own. u dont hav to go around readin books and copying "euro" or "cali" styles here and there to be a decent graffer...u can be inventive and varying etc. dats the fun of graff!
     
  8. Drakula

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    Spec start making your letters one constant size and without the massive gashes in them.Remove the drips also,inside and outside of the piece.The throw inside the last piece looks decent though.Can we see a bigger version?

    Bomber444,I'm from London,England.Why?
     
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  9. eng

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    the proceed battle is in the battle thread but u hav to be quick if u still want to enter.. i think
    mine doesnt count cos i put colour n its sposed to be pen freestyle only :p

    w.e
     
  10. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    ayo senyor amkah could i ask you wat do i need to do make the letters lukk better (did i say that the throw lukks bad too?) :(
     
  11. ShIfTeD

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  12. Bomber444

    Bomber444 Senior Member

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  13. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    ew loose the arrows. theyre random as shit man. and loose the weird filllers. try some black and white and work on your letters four about 4 months then start bringing some color..
     
  14. AnteUp

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  15. Casa45

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  16. knewsince.

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    lose the thing on the top right of the a...its weird.the m is too skwiggly as is the e. casa...mad dope man. i seriously like that.

    im not enterin a battle, i just saw the word in here and decided to practice with those letters. i know the top of the first e is fucked. any other help?

    ai43.photobucket.com_albums_e387_x_casper_proceed.jpg
     
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  17. bojangles

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  18. EsKoNeR!!

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  19. Bomber444

    Bomber444 Senior Member

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    yea 1nonly blaze, i gotta do some black and white for a while. Mayb I'll have some shit later.
     
  20. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    nice m work on your thowes