Its crappy ass ink that I found at my dads office lol Should I add anything to it? Anything i should change (other than the lines)?

 

"Should I add anythign to it" <-- Meaning in the mop, ink, etc.

 

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Back when i started, as in, like a week after. lol I sucks major ass, I know.

Crits?

 

oh shit that was philly style? No disrespect man but you need more practice just like me
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yeah i dont like philly style either... impossible to read. all the letters look the same, although no beef on anybody! just my opinion.

 

i agree dude fuck philly style

 

co-sign.

 

Don't hate on other styles, that's the point of style. Philly style is hard to do, even if it looks like scribbles. I've seen some dope Philly styles, that were insane. I don't like it much either, but it's just different. Keep up the Philly style, it's starting to look good whahappen.

 

Maybe it's just me but i like to be able ot tell what a tag says.

 

bump.... crits?

 

Work on the S and E, it doesn't flow very well.

 

I was wondering if someone could write a few revive tags just to give me some ideas. I'm having a hard time coming up with a good tag.

 

Look at every single tag with your letters in it. Don't bite it, but find a good flow like it. It will help, trust me.

 

crits?

 

i would have to say you have to many add ons. just try something plain and with minimal add ons, and some good flow.

 

whoever and what not

 

those are sick man. whatd you write em with?

 

tag with the resin from a spliff... a bingo dabber with some next ink in it