Yeah i agree i think also is because its so busy looking i think it will even out as i fill more in. for ex here it is with the back fill [Broken External Image]:http://aycu12.webshots.com/image/18251/2000353749337817088_rs.jpg crits crits crits=]
i would just take out those weird blocks above and to the side of your letters. and the letter connections.
shut uuup please !!! .. didnt you see my post about you ? Captain...i wouldnt call that top one a simple....you aint used bars..and there is like sum little men living onit...wtf ?...the bottom one well...i don tknow...the letters ae up n down..its not bad i guess.... Dusk...is that a K ?.. so...no intermediate thread guys...
I'll try again, some more Wu Tang Shit [Broken External Image]:http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/8806/dsc00017rd8.jpg
THe-Sheep, the 'W" is ok, the rest of the letters need a lot of work structure-wise. 'WC TAHG' is what it looks like. The 'T' has a lot of shit going on compared to the other letters, doesn't really fit. Dusk, dunno about all those lines aye, makes it look kinda like your letters are made of tree trunks. I'd lose the connections, they look way too forced. Same with the addons. The 'K' needs a lot of work, looks too much like an 'H'. Wisp, the second one isn't too bad, looks a little straight and square in some places that some curves would bring out your letters quite nicely. [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw16.jpg
THE SHEEP!! I LOVE THAT WU TANG PIECE. nice.... d_g like that Kaset throwww Captain- the second ones pretty illin Dusk- fix that K, doesn't look like a K at all... bump for crits
just fucking around last night did this in a few minutes... dont really like how the letters turned out as a whole, but liked the connection with the G and N. Tear it apart, what do you think.
I think you should give crits before asking for them... whatever... what does it say? I can't even read it.