tick - at least you're obviously working in bars, thats a good sign. keep that up, but dont make your letters so slim and bend them alot less for starters like your style, but whats up with the orange? is it shading? the s is really nice some shit from yesterday
Grape- im really sorry for this but im gonna be completely truthful, that looks horrible, it has zero flow, the lines look really awkward, and the letters are well crap, also i think throw ups shouldn't look "Sketched" in my opinion, try it again but make the shapes of the letters less "Square" and instead of just sticking in lines to turn the shapes into your letters, mold the shapes so the lines look less awkward, just look around at some throws and start from there Afek- not a bad simple, work on the K though, beef it up ditch the background Socrates- stigma? kind of hard to read but really nice, feelin the style, the blending of the T and I looks like a G though maybe separate them? AMK- i like the lettering, flows well and is smooth, the fill confuses me though, half of a letter is the same color as half another letter? The character is sub par as well, stick with your usual characs, looks like its gonna end up lookin fresh, i like that your shit is original Glass- figured i'd give you a crit since you've bumped that same pic at least 5 times, looks nice i guess, the A needs alot of work though, looks like your trying to make something work that doesnt work? Im not a big fan of "Pattern" sketches either so i gues im biased, but i just think these pattern pieces that alot of people do don't take much creativity, its the same bending pattern over and over for each letter...bleh i dont know might just be me though Hunting- i love fat letters and bars so of course i love that piece, the G though, looks out of proportion, maybe bulk up the C part of it (Might not understand, sorry i make up alot of shit) not feeling the REM as much but its nice as well, i think its the fill Revolt- your bars and widths are way way off, stick with a set width for now then work your way up Baze- honestly i don't like the b, i have more of an appreciation for simpler letters that look nice, instead of an average letter with 1000 souped up transformer power ranger add ons Ante- Its a pattern piece but i actually like it keep it up man
crazy ass fill/AMKAH style lol View attachment 284524 im gonna leave tha crazy fills up ta amkah...lol crits?
old two letter throw [Broken External Image]:http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/8770/1000057vn4.jpg old shit [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/5985/1000011hc8.jpg unfinished couldnt get a k i liked [Broken External Image]:http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/3037/1000024ge3.jpg
yea buddy just cuz ive only been on BS for 18 posts dont mean im not anywhere else, u think....and ASEKikon from London would kill all these kids in a battle look on Lounge37 you ignorant fool, and if they are gunna have a battle take it to another thread i thought thats the point of a battle thread...
i know! read threads theres a battle... [Broken External Image]:http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/100_0924.jpg some simples???? boka one- not feeling it ante - the colour makes it hard to read?
afek-you seem like you are going to develop a nice style from the looks of it, keep it up and work hard man Boka- i like that last piece man, why not finish it? Ante- for the record it was a nice attempt but im not a fan, i think part of the reason AMKs fills look nice is the fact that it matches the shape and contour of his letters Damn, wish i had a camera, been working on some pieces but cant post anything up right now, I'll be here to crit though i guess
letters dont flow and it looks like your forcing out a grimpey type style because you like the shit heops and 666 crew does to be honest reminds me alot of water12's style not in a good way though tone it down a bit and make your own style the way you like it so that something fresh comes out of it
ahh shaddap, hop off there pieces..... molotov the star look fine there but the only thing wrong with it is that it doesn't flow with the rest of the letters. make it bumpy like the letters and a little thicker. also make it a part of your letter not random shit inside of it.
i added an A to the B i posted a few pages back. that looks nice sume. why didn't you do your usual E?