revolt- u need to start way simpler go to the new 2 graff thread.. "go simple" is all thought this thread
Bump. I like your style Eske one.But just clean it up and get rid of that thing coming off the bottom of the R. Revolt I think you should make the letters a little simpler and have them in the same proportion.See the the thing on the top right of the K?It's really small compared to the rest.Just keep it simple for now. God telling people to go simple is so boring.
I dont think its that bad!! [Broken External Image]:http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/1531/picture015je4.jpg Critz Please?
wow, youre in no possition to give crits. stop connecting your letters like that and just keep doing simple letters with no filler.
Lol. i know simples and i have been doin a ton of em but i just did this for fun to practice my extentions and 3d lol. wow. yeahhh. anywayss. [Broken External Image]:http://aycu12.webshots.com/image/20331/2003670387161674708_rs.jpg crits? haha.
Well I was messing around with the simple letter structure and smoked a joint and thought about making the piece flow with the connections. my problem was that I didn't make the connections flow at all, and the little bubble things inside the letters got fucked up so, its a messed up piece Ill find a new picture.
dusk : stick with what your doing. good simples are hot and will always be hot in graffiti. take your time and dont rush it. check some of the links here on bs or even look through a lot of the forums, and u will see simples nice and clean. they are timeless. its like if riding a bike is bustin some sick wild style, the training wheels are your simples. u can try to learn to ride a bike straight up, while this works in rare occasions no matter what your gunna fall off. with the training wheels it makes the transition much easier. so id rather see your simples then...........well, that.
[Broken External Image]:http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/486/untitled1copysw8.jpg Try doing block simples..
Actually I'm not going to delete it, hopefully some people will read it and realise that Mr Sezer Hands and I are trying to keep this shit as tidy as possible. Baze is right, the threads in the section that are 'picture and constructive criticism' threads are being watched closely at the moment, and pretty much everything that isn't helpful or a crit is being deleted, warning and suspensions will be given out to repeat offenders. Believe or not there are actually some people here who want to learn and progress and not just be 'all-internet' writers, and us mods are doing our best to keep the shit out of the threads so that it's not cluttered with tripe.
morne i dont really like that throw much..i like the one u crossed out better. i think it looks better simple bubble letters.. not with the thing going off the o and r and e...but ur on the right track... heres a sticker. and a umm i dont know what it is.......... [Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/9408/phto0152da8.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8392/46jo9.jpg
and quite frankly i think that our new mods (d_g and sezer) deserve a massive round of applause. they have been doing an extraordinary job and quite frankly, i cannot imagine spending my free time deleting unnecessary posts. good job to you both. im gonna have to agree with what sizo said. lose the weird little bumps on the top. and the reason for that crit was so i wouldnt be critless. edit: i only think the ones on the m looks bad.
those are throwies, let him mold them how ever he wants. thats why there's so many different throwup styles. View attachment 285897