Ok but I can do that already, I know what bars are, I know how to use them already.

 

well its not evident in your sketches


look i tried to fix the bad parts for you but i cant do shit in ms paint so just to give you an idea

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I can do that already...

 

so y dont u?

 

Becuase it's boring to do and i'm trying to do something a little more creative.

 

Fine, do what you want then...

and in a couple of months when you still suck, well, that's not our fault.

 

Do you understand what i'm trying to say?

I can do that shit already, I can do my letters basic as fuck, I can do it with or without bars already

 

yea, were telling u to do it for a reason, if ur gunna complain dont post here

 

Whatever then, if you CAN do all that shit you don't need to ask us for help, we're not gonna tell you how to develop a style.

 

I never asked for any help.

 

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why dont u post up with basic letters then to prove that you can do it, look at any good writer, they all use bars to still construct their letters, sume uses bars, everyone in the big boy forums, if you are trying to do more complex stuff, youve still got to remeber bars. but whatever do what you want, a mod should delete all this shit anyway,

edit - silent vandal that throwie looks pretty ill , but i cant do throwies worth shit, the k at the end just looks a bit more complex to all the other letters

 

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k and o are wackk, dont pay them any heed. im trying to get somewhat simpler?

 

double post.

..ignore the 'simple' on top of the sketch

 

Yeah, Im a big fan of Sky. Thanks for the feedback. It was only a 10 minute thing(exscuse for the bad structure), but im trying to advance my style and what you said makes alot of sense. I've felt like I just cant figure shit out for awhile now so hearin that helps. Thanks homie. Ups to Sky5 too.

Oh.

DH- Use bars. Thats a good way to stay simple.

 

dude why you asking for crits if you gonna bash em or ignore em ? :S were just trying to help man.

 

I told them I could already do that, and they said the same exact thing again. I'm not pissed at them for telling me I need to work on my shit, I already know I do I just got pissed becuase I don't think they even read a word I wrote.

 

look, we did read what you wrote, its just your peice didnt show that you knew how to use bars because from the picture you could easily tell u didnt use bars. you obviously dont have simples down if that was supposed to be something 'abit more creative'. im not taking this any further, if you have any problems just pm me

 

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pic of my sketch tattoo'd on friend as promised
mike- if u dont wanna listen to others, dont, but your not goin to goin anywhere bein stubborn