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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. RepUrSet

    RepUrSet Senior Member

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    bump..guess its my fault for not asking for crits

    so yeah...crits? :D

    popshots-- uh..that say zekt? try to define the letters a bit more but it might just be because its in pencil;
    chalk--dope stuff man keep it up:rolleyes: only thing i dont like all that much is that little nudge on the upper-right bar of the k
    cell...- uh...mre?moe? try working on the letter structure a bit rather than the inner effects
     
  2. Vice

    Vice Senior Member

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    ohhh i see it now. i guess maybe try to slant the large part. i dunno tho it could just be my own eyes.
     
  3. NoneOfThisIsReal

    NoneOfThisIsReal Senior Member

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    Popshots: I like it. Try outlining in ink? Was that light blue smudge intentional? Maybe add a baby-blue to white or baby-blue to darker blue fade?
    RepUrSet: Nice karaks

    Still working on that shaky hand. crits?
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  4. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    if i posted this on the bottom ill be pissed

    bump for more crit

    None: nice flow but work on the E a bit, just a few little tweaks on the slanted bars on the top and bottom of it
     
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  5. NoneOfThisIsReal

    NoneOfThisIsReal Senior Member

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  6. popshots

    popshots Senior Member

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  7. NoneOfThisIsReal

    NoneOfThisIsReal Senior Member

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    It's inve, I just need to work on making my V's look like V's.
     
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  8. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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  9. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    ha!

    this is what i got out of being baked off my ass.

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    [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/gorescabthrow.jpg
    (^^ charac not by me. by my little brother. XD)

    [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_2196-1.jpg
    (bump this cuz everyone liked it. and im proud. lawl. bustin the simples.)


    im still fuckin burnt right now even. it makes my hand a bit shakier, but a lot of new ideas flow.


    silentvandal, thats beautiful. i would have somethin goin on in that 3d though. would definitely make it shine.
     
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  10. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    chalk- love the simps, first one's a fav
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    new one with brighter colors

    scab-last one has some potential, sober up, clean it up, and u could be onto something
    ps- drawing high is fuckin retarded, i love chronic, but it makes ur art sloppy, shitty, lazy
     
  11. eso239

    eso239 Member

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    ai46.photobucket.com_albums_f105_shaggydopeg_Picture004_1.jpg
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    inve- dont be afraid to overlap ur letters keep up with the simples
     
  12. Sou - Mvd

    Sou - Mvd Senior Member

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  13. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    Borg...dope as..nice work..i just think the flaring K leg looks akward the way the 3d is...but thats nothing..hehe :p
    Chalk ... Extremely nice....i like that simple the best:D
     
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  14. esko

    esko Member

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    sou - good shit, looks clean

    ai17.tinypic.com_6885cb5.jpg

    tag...
     
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  15. Scouse

    Scouse New Member

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    sumoe that is nice
     
  16. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    pop: looks much better colored

    did this a while ago and tried some different add ons and such, i dont really like it though but it was more or less just a test. crits?

    ai19.tinypic.com_4zuomrd.gif
     
  17. esko

    esko Member

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    looks alright, try adding more stuff now since you got the letter structure down alright


    ai18.tinypic.com_53tnx1u.gif

    i know the e doesnt really flow, but w/e
     
  18. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    try and keep the letters a bit more visible, mainly the far end on the right, but still connected to the others even though it looks like it was only because you ran out of space. 3D looks ok, just try and clean it up and work on letter structure, like dont bend that E so far to the right on the bottom. stuff like that.
     
  19. NEOZ

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  20. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    I kinda like the last one, work some on cleanliness.