ensr-i have yours.
but my camera runs on floppy disc.
and sometimes it feels like telling me theyre not formatted.
so until find the box theyre in i cant flick it.

 

enser, try to get cleaner.

I had five minutes with a pen today (lately all i've had are prismas and crayons.) and came out with a couple freestyles

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Once I get my hands on a pencil, eraser and a my lining marker i'ma do some full pieces.

 

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Enser, I am really feeling the first.

 

just a real lazy simple.
crits?
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i could not get the S to flow. but it is 1 in the morning...

i also accidentally posted this in the blackbook exchange.. o well.

 

captain sorry but i dont like none of your letters except for the k on the top sketch
phob keep going with those simples
flask go simplier

first two are exchanges with enser and a little euro style letters at the type (i think lol)



and a sketch i busted out in 5 minutes kinda wack but wat the hell

 

your insane, im soberer now so ill get to work on yours and mr. uhhs

 

didnt bite...but honestly got the idea from preys use of cursive...thut it wud be cooll...good shit btw..

 

jus 2 of my many throwies. crits por favor (rushed)

 

There are quite a few writers who rock the script style.
example of one awsome one:
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Serch


anyways, heres an exchange I did with asen, forgive my shitty e =[

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My latest disaster, crits?

sou - Probably too good for me to crit so...loving the style, i can't make out the e tho...

kase - Those throws are nice but the k on the bottom one sucks, fix up the bottom right leg

gumdrop - Don't use arrows yet.

 

word.
i only take not on the better writer when they crit me.

Captain....sum Fezat wannabee ish there...change it up....blocks ?..whatever
Sou..the blue en is dopeeee...lookjs like Revolt...Revok...noce shit anyway
Ensr...there is already a good Ensr on here and he would cream you..i dont spose he cars anyway

peace


Finally got scanner up etc.
lol..

emm...

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im in need of crits..

 

Not really feeling it, something is missing you have a lot of negative space in your letters and the bends you put on them are kinda whack it looks like its going everywhere.

 

I think if you made the A straight, the CH bending towards the right and the LK bending towards the left into the A it would look dope taking away a lot of the negative space.

 

the ensr things for an exchange..

 

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ugh i can't seem to get it right...ahwell...for sketch
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and another one of mine....don't like the c but...

 

feelin the first one a bit more than the 2nd
some of ur leters in the second have potential, but just arent defines well enough, ohh well, keep up the good work

also, cut out all the characters, a bit distracting, lettering is more important

 

thanks for clearing that up for me uhhh

and amk you should really read the comment we post the pics with mine cleary said FIRST TWO AND EXCHANGES WITH ENSR

by the way this is eske one

 

crits

 

HEY WILL SOMEONE TELL ME IF THIS LOOKS DECENT OR TERRIBLE. All take negative coments too lol. Or thoughts of improvement. THX in advance.