Ya i know, cuz no one has graff myspaces


drak, its like u started out hella dope, then it just didnt come out.
emel, im feelin it


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i dont think the drips along the top look very good.

love that color combo though. good choice. maybe some white highlights.

you might wanna try closing up your O. like with a line instead of a circle as a hole. with the top of the E too. give it a try and see how you like it.

 

ya im not feelin the drips either.
but i usually dont open my E and O.
i do a line

 

wow im felling this painted simple...maby make the e a lil bit more seen

 

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the flow on that E is dope

 

Decent, good can control just make the L a little bigger, id like to see that style and flow on your full name i think itd look sick

 

what do you think

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The only thing i see really wrong is my can control
Please help me out if you see anything wrong.
The other thing is the R in the NERO peice, I don't Like it it.

 

Im from Columbus. Ever heard of omnimix.com? Its ohios graffiti forum. Great to learn about your local crews and shit and lookin at pictures of the stuff. Check it out.

 

Nero...hate to burst yah bubble..but everythin is wrong..drop your paint and work on your letters in the books.

 

im going to have to agree with amk... it looks like you were really trying, its just no good. go back to the blackbook, make a few sketches, and post em up and well crit them for ya.

 

good start, keep practicing. bottom right is the best. just keep shit round and fuck around with em.

 

main i think that you should put a dot or oval or whatever you what in the center of the bottom round part of the a. on the top three pics i would have to say that the a could be mistaken for a messed up o. the a is only obvious in the last pic. other than that though i think its good. just mess around a bit with the a.

 

weldo sik nice ass fill ser there nice spots but save emtell u get better sketch more and then practice under bridges anro has a sik bomb and i nice fade emal lovin that simple i like the drips on skribls bomb they look good with the colors. [Broken External Image]:http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/5637/averwhitefillblueforcefec0.th.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/7474/avewingedbombwhitelx7.th.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/4825/dripydripytagrc3.th.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/2734/fillheatspotyk6.th.jpg critz?

 

ALRITE HERE COMES THE MOST TOY QUESTION. WHAT IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A PIECE, A THROWIE, AND BOMBING? i mean i kind of understand but please i need yur help i dont wanna be a toy forever and hey u can laugh at me if u want but we all start somewhere..

 

look in the threads with those words in them... it will pretty much explain itself

 

i'm not tryin 2 b mean... but these look horrible. I thot the NERO piece sed Hero. u need mor work on ur letters. try writing them out just as they are b4 adding a whole lotta the other stuff.
nd yea u do need better can control. just practice homie

 

anroe - good can control homie

 

Throwie is usually bubble styled, simple, and two coloured graff... Bombing is kinda the same... And piece is more complex graff with more colours in it... It also has highlights, drop shadows, 3ds and such...